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1、雅思高分作文精讲教育类Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldtakecoursesthataredecidedbythegovernment.Othersthinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtofocusonsubjectsthattheyprefer.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.7分范文Educationhasbeenviewedasoneofthemostessentialelementsofindividualands

2、ocialdevelopment.Onetopicnowunderdebateiswhoshouldmakethedecisionsonwhatstudentsstudy.Academically,studentswillgainbenefitsifthecurriculumcanbedevisedbythegovernment.Learnersneedfoundationsbeforetheyacquiremoreadvancedknowledge.Withoutopportunitiestolearnthebasi

3、cs,studentwouldfinditdifficulttofurthertheirstudiesorloseinterestintheirstudiesaltogether.Intermsofmeetingthedemandofthejobmarket,itwouldbemoreefficientifthegovernmentplanandarrangethecoursesforschoolanduniversity.Students’ownselectionsofcoursesmayberandom.Mosto

4、fthemdonotreallyknowwhatthejobmarketexpectsfromthem,sosomeguidancefromthegovernmentisanecessity.However,thisdoesnotmeanthattheofficialcurriculumisalwaysproductive.Educatorsshouldbeawareofthefactthatindividualshavedifferentcharactersandabilities.Ifallthestudentsi

5、nacertainfieldtakethesamecourses,theirpotentialmaynotbefullydeveloped.Accordingly,manytalentedstudentsmayfeelfrustratedwithlearningandthenationwillnotgetthetalentitneedsforitsadvancement.Myownopinionisthatstudentsinprimaryandsecondaryschoolsshouldtakecoursesthat

6、thegovernmentschooseforthembecausetheydonotreallyhavethecapacitytofindoutcoursesthatwillservetheirpurposes.Ontheuniversitylevel,though,studentsshouldbeallowedtoparticipateinthedecision-makingprocessofdesigningthecurriculumasonlyinthiswaycantheiracademicpotential

7、befullyexplored.考官解析本文对双方观点进行分析，并且在结尾段给出结论。文章先写出政府确定的课程能帮助学生打好基础并且更加系统的学习，然后鞋如果学生确定可能则能更好的发挥潜力。结尾的结论对于不同年龄的学生进行区分，提出对于中小学生课程应该由政府决定。大学生有了一定的专业基础和较强的判断力，完全可以参与课程决定的过程。重点词汇View```as```把···看作···=regard```as```/thinkof```as```Element=factor元素Curriculum课程的总称，集合名词，所以不

8、能加aDevise设计　设置Foundation基础Further推进　固定搭配　furthertheirstudiesAltogether完全地　　彻底地Demand需求　固定搭配　meetthedemandof```Selection=option选择Random随意的　Guidance指导　　原型guideNecessity