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1、荷塘月色朱自清MoonlightovertheLotusPond朱纯深译MoonlightovertheLotusPond杨宪益、戴乃迭译MoonlightovertheLotusPond李明译第一段①这几天心里颇不宁静。[朱译]①Ihavefeltquiteupsetrecently.[杨戴译]①Thelastfewdayshavefoundmeveryrestless.[李明译]①Thesedayshavefoundmequiteinturmoil.②今晚在院子里坐着乘凉，忽然想起日日走过的荷塘，
2、在这满月的光里，总该另有一番样子吧。[朱译]②Tonight,whenIwassittingintheyardenjoyingthecool,itoccurredtomethattheLotusPond,whichIpassbyeveryday,mustassumequiteadifferentlookinsuchmoonlitnight.[杨戴译]②ThiseveningasIsatintheyardtoenjoythecool,itstruckmehowdifferentthelotuspool[
3、Ipasseveryday]mustlookunderafullmoon.[李明译]②TonightasIwassittinginmyyardenjoyingthecool,IsuddenlythoughtofthelotuspondIpassbyeveryday:onsuchafully-moonlitnight,itmustassumeadifferentoutlook.③月亮渐渐地升高了，墙外马路上孩子们的欢笑，已经听不见了；妻在屋里拍着闰儿，迷迷糊糊地哼着眠歌。[朱译]③Afullmoonwa
4、srisinghighinthesky;thelaughterofchildrenplayingoutsidehaddiedaway;intheroom,mywifewaspattingtheson,Run-er,sleepilyhummingacradlesong.[杨戴译]③Themoonwassailinghigherandhigheruptheheavens,thesoundofchildishlaughterhaddiedawayfromthelanebeyondourwall,andmyw
5、ifewasinthehousepattingJunerandhummingalullabytohim.[李明译]③As,themoonwasrisinghigherandhigherupinthesky,thelaughterofchildrenplayinghaddiedawayfromthealleysbeyondourwall.④Insideourhome,mywifewaspattingomson—Ran’er,sleepilyhummingacradlesong.④我悄悄地披了大衫，带上门
6、出去。[朱译]④Shruggingonanovercoat,quietly,Imademywayout,closingthedoorbehindme.[杨戴译]④Iquietlyslippedonalonggown,andwalkedoutleavingthedooronthelatch.[李明译]⑤Andquitequietly,Iputonmylonggown,leftthedooronmelatchandmademywaytowardsthepond.注：在这两个译本中，“披了大衫”、“带上门”
7、和“出去”等三个动作[专业上被称作“语义范畴”]有不同的语言处理，有的被处理成谓语，有的被处理成状语。第二段①沿着荷塘，是一条曲折的小煤屑路。[朱译]①AlongsidetheLotusPondrunsasmallcinderfootpath.[杨戴译]①Acinder-pathwindsalongbythesideofthepool.[李明译]①Alongthepondwindsanarrowcinderfootpath.②这是一条幽僻的路；白天也少人走，夜晚更加寂寞。③荷塘四面，长着许多树，蓊蓊郁
8、郁的。④路的一旁，是些杨柳，和一些不知道名字的树。[朱译]②Itispeacefulandsecludedhere,aplacenotfrequentedbypedestrianseveninthedaytime;nowatnight,itlooksmoresolitary,inalush,shadyambienceoftreesallaroundthepond.③Onthesidewherethepathis,therearewillows,inter
