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1、Unit7willpeoplehaverobots？SectionB3a—3cwriting初中英语八年级上册人教新课标2011版授课教师：杨艳君中学一级教师郑州市第七十三中学Unit7Willpeoplehaverobots?SectionB3a---3cYangYanjunLearninggoals1.通过头脑风暴和阅读范文，能说出有关未来生活的表达方式，并梳理出范文的写作结构。2.通过独立写作，能写出一篇80词左右文章来描述自己的未来生活。3.参照作文评分标准，通过自评、互评的方式，能评价、修改自己和同伴

2、的文章。Brainstormcitiestrafficbuildingsenvironmentcar/subwaycrowdedmoveto…pollutionareporter3aJillWhere?Whatwillherlifebelikeinthefuture?Pre-writing写作准备Title:_______________jobhomeclothesfreetimeactivitiesreporter(Shanghai)meetlotsofinterestingpeopleanapartment

3、(small)notgoodforpets(bird)duringtheweek:wearsmartclothesonweekends:looklesssmarttakeaholidayinHongKongAustraliaMindmapJill’sfuturelifein20yearswhenpossibleWhatmakesyourpassagebetter?Assessment(评价标准)language(语言)6分structure(结构)2分content(内容)5分handwriting(书写)2分

4、allthedetails(细节)threepartsspellingorgrammarmistakesgoodsentenceslinkwords(连接词)cleanandtidyWritingtipsMylifein20yearsjobhomefreetimeactivitiessportsholidayWhile-writing写作阶段Post-writing:revising修改阶段1.Underlinegoodsentences2.givethepoints.3.Giveyouradvicetoma

5、kethepassagebetter.exampleEvaluationstandards(评价标准)items13-15分9-12分5-8分structure结构well-organized,clearandlogicalquitecompletenotsocompleteandclearcontent内容goodopinionsfewmistakes2or3mistakesmisssomepoints,somemistakeslanguage语言correct,fluentcolorfulalittledu

6、ll(枯燥的)brokensentenceshandwriting书法comfortabletoread,beautifulcleanandclearugly,untidy优秀作文展示1.请各小组推荐一篇优秀作文在班上进行展示,请大声朗读作文并与全班分享好词好句及评语。2.其他同学要认真听，并能在听完后记下优美词句。Correctyourmistakesandmakeyouressaybetter.ShowtimesummarysummaryLifeinthefutureThefuturebelongstoth

7、osewhobelieveinthebeautyoftheirdreams.Homework随着科技的发展，我们的生活发生了很大改变。很多以前不可能发生的事现在都成为了现实。因此，我们将来的生活也会多姿多彩。请以“Lifeinthefuture”为题写一篇文章描述未来的生活吧。Thankyou.录制单位：郑州市第七十三中学录制人员：周灿茹常慧贤谭超刘丹王攀花录制时间：二0一五年一月十九日