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1、（恩波英语研究所）（一）FirePreventiononCampus1.前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失2.分析火灾发生的原因3.作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生•审题概述•这是一篇分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为屮心的文章，撰写的重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。【范文】•FirePreventiononCampusPeoplearealarmedbythesuccessionofcampusfiresi
2、nrecentyears.Ineachoftheseaccidents,heavycasualtieswerereported一houseswereburneddown,studentslosttheirlives,andpropertiesweredamaged.Facedwithsuchachillingfact,peoplekeepasking,“Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?9*Abriefsurveyofthemrevealsthathumanfactorsstillpro
3、vetobetheleadingcauses.Forexample,threeofthesefireswerecausedbythestudents9useofelectricwater-heaters.Asstudentsoftenleavetheheatersunattended,therisksareratherhigh•Inothercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,etc.Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenp
4、reventedifproperprecautionshadbeentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportanceandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticularimportanceforusstudents:First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher・Second,double-checkcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricapp
5、liances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms.Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.◊第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文◊语言点提示：（1）此句Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?常XT作为过渡句，引出下文（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使川被动语态，如arealarmedby,werereported,wereburneddown,weredamaged,Facedwith。◊第二段思路点评：论述火灾的主
6、要原因是使用热得快烧水，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实川电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂。◊语言点提示：electricwater-heaters电热水器◊第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first,second,lastly□◊语言点提示：takeprecautions采取预防措施fireextinguisheriX火器（二）EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts1.校园盗窃案件时有发生2.物品被盗的原因3.学生如何加强防盗意识•审题概述•这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章
7、。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】•EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusTheftsTfyoudon'twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,yoifdbetterputthemoninsleep/5goesapopularjokeamongstudents・Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingasthey
8、occurfarmoreoftenthanbefore・Anditseemsthatthethievesarelesschoosythesedays,withtheirtargetsrangi
