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1、恩波〈考研英语考前30天狂背作文〉恩波〈考研英语考前30天狂背作文〉下载九贡献：国内大学英语考试辅导专家，具有丰富的考试辅导经验。在教学上精益求精，激情洋溢，有高度的责任心。现已出版多部英语专著，“黄金模板”系列更居同类图书榜首。在苏、浙、沪等地多所大学授课，深受学生欢迎。恩波学校六级网站版主，第一位在网上为全国学生免费批改作文的老师，也是目前全国批改作文最多的老师。Directions16Studythefollowingpicturecarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould:1.desc

2、ribethepicture;2.interpretthemeaning;3.suggestpossiblesolutions.Youshouldwrite160~200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.审题：该文的图画画了两个人望楼兴叹，很明显该文谈的是我国当前的房价过高、房地产行业如何良性发展的问题。Sample:Inthepicture,twopeoplearetalkingaboutanewlybuiltsetofapartmentbuildings.Onesays,“Itistooexpensive.”

3、Theothergoesontosay,“Howcanweaffordit?”Itisobviousthatthedrawerofthispicturewantstodrawourattentiontowardsourrealestateindustry.Nowadays,ourrealestateindustryhasexperiencedsuchanunprecedentedboomthatallofusbegintoconsideritastoohotinonewayoranother.Theaveragepricehasb

4、eensoaringforquiteafewyears.Insomebigcitiesitseemstobeoutofcontrol—ithasbeennearlyimpossibleforthecommonlocalcitizenstoaffordasatisfactoryapartmentinthedowntownarea.Consequently,howtocreateahealthierandmorereasonablepropertymarkethasbeenaproblemofgreatimportance.Among

5、allthepossiblemeasures,Ibelievethefollowingonesarethemostappropriate.Inthefirstplace,thelegislatorsshouldestablishaseriesofpoliciessoastocurbspeculationandthuskeepthepriceofhousesatareasonablelevel.Inthesecondplace,thegovernmentsatalllevelsshouldmakebetteruseofthelimi

6、tedlandresourcesbybuildingthemecommunitiesinthesuburbs.Lastbutbynomeanstheleast,moreeconomicallyaffordablehousingshouldbebuiltsoastorelievetheburdenofcommoncitizens.Onlythroughthejointeffortsofallsidescanwerealizethehealthydevelopmentofourhousingmarket.Untilthattime,o

7、urpeoplewillsurelypossesstheirownhousesandenjoyabetterandmoreharmoniouslife.点评：该文分为四段来写。第一段先描写两个人的对话。之后末句引到主题上，即我国的房地产行业。第二段先写当前房地产过热，而后说价格猛涨。在某些大城市里房价似乎失控——人们无力购房。末句写创造健康理性的房地产市场成为了重要问题。第三段分三点来写应采取的措施。最后一段做结，第一句承上段说只有各方通力合作才能实现房地产市场的健康发展。第二句说到那个时候，人们将能拥有自己的房屋并享受更好更和谐

8、的生活。这一句是呼应第一段，非常重要。心得：6恩波〈考研英语考前30天狂背作文〉文中realestateindustry是“房地产行业”，而propertymarket和housingmarket指的是房地产市场。首段末句是引出主题的句子，请大家用