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1、一、金融危机(答题型议论文)FinancialCrisisItisnodenyingthefactthat(T)theongoinginternationalfinancialcrisishaslandedtheworldeconomyinthemostdifficultsituationsincelastcentury’sGreatDepression.Amassofunemployment,housingproblemanddifficultbusinessconditionsforenterprises(and
2、housingproblem)haveinfluencedour(life)livesinmanyaspects.Therefore,justasthesayinggoes,“Afallinapit,againinyourwit”,Wemustlearnfromthiscrisisandsparenoeffortstotakesomemeasuretosolvethisproblem.(Asweknowthat)Actually,therearemanystepswhichcanbe(taken)adoptedto(
3、undo)dealwiththisproblem.Firstofall,thegovernment(would)should(introduce)establishrelevantpoliciestohelpgraduatesandmigrantworkersfindjobsand(provide)offermoregovernment-fundedjobsinpublicservice.Inaddition,anotherwaycontributingtothesuccessofsolvingtheproblemi
4、stohelptheenterprisesovercomethedifficultperiodwiththestructuraltaxcutandtechnicalinnovation.Atthesametime,thegovernment(would)isboundtoincreasespendinginhousingprojecttohelpvulnerablegroupshavetheresidenceinbothurbanandruralareas.(Above)Allinall,tosolvetheprob
5、lemoffinancialcrisis,boththegovernmentandordinarypeopleshouldjoinhandstocarryouteffectivemeasures.Asabigresponsibleanddevelopingcountry,Chinashouldactinanactiveandresponsiblewayduringthiscrisistokeepthesteadyandfastgrowthofitseconomy,andcontributeourpowerforglo
6、balfinancialstabilityandworldeconomicgrowth.评论：写作还是需要使用书面语和适当地使用一些常用句型，特别是在开头和结尾。建议特别注意词汇的搭配和词组的使用。Aboveall是“首先”，不是“总而言之”，如果要表示总结归纳就要换成allinall。二、信息技术（利弊型议论文）InformationTechnologyNowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernovertheuseofinformation5technology.Generallyspea
7、king,itiswidelybelievedthat(thereare)ithasseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.(Firstly)Firstandforemost,theinternet,atypicalapplicationofinformationtechnology,presentsanopportunityfortheadvancementofacquisitionandapplicationofknowledge.(Andsecondly)What’smore,thein
8、ternetprovidespeoplewithavirtualexistencewhichisfarmoreappealingthanthetraditionallife.Forinstance,peopleareabletowatchvariousTVprogramsorevenmovies,instructiveorentertainin
