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1、智课网TOEFL备考资料新托福写作：结尾四大注意事项如何写好托福作文的开头是许多考生所关注的，但是结尾段也同样重要，一个好的作文结尾也会给文章增色不少。今天我们就来说说托福写作结尾段的四大注意事项：重申立场重申立场+总结理由让步+重申立场重申立场+引申扩展引申扩展包括：强调反对派立场会带来的后果展望未来问题的前景强调重要性一、重申立场“Itisdifficultforpeopletoachieveprofessionalsuccesswithoutsacrificingimportantaspectsofafulfillingpe
2、rsonallife.”Inconclusion,giventhegrowingdemandsofcareerontoday’sprofessionals,afulfillingpersonalliferemainspossiblebyworkingsmarter,bysettingpriorities,andbymakingsuitablecareerchoices.二、重申立场+总结理由“Sincescienceandtechnologyarebecomingmoreandmoreessentialtomodernsociet
3、y,schoolsshoulddevotemoretimetoteachingscienceandtechnologyandlesstoteachingtheartsandhumanities.”Inconclusion,schoolsshouldnotdevotelesstimetotheartsandhumanities.Theseareasofstudyaugmentandenhancelearninginmathematicsandscience,aswellashelpingtopreservetherichnessof
4、ourentirehumanlegacywhileinspiringustofurtherit.Moreover,disciplineswithinthehumanitiesprovidemethodsandcontextsforevaluatingthemoralityofourtechnologyandfordeterminingitsproperdirection.三、让步+重申立场“Jobsecurityandsalaryshouldbebasedonemployeeperformance,notonyearsofserv
5、ice.Rewardingemployeesprimarilyforyearsofservicediscouragespeoplefrommaintainingconsistentlyhighlevelsofproductivity.”Inthefinalanalysis,thestatementcorrectlyidentifiesjobperformanceasthesinglebestcriterionforsalaryandjobsecurity.However,thestatementgoestoofar,itignor
6、esthefactthatacost-of-livingsalaryincreasefortenuredemployeesnotonlyenhancesloyaltyand,intheend,productivity,butalsoisrequiredbyfairness.四、重申立场+引申扩展Howfarshouldasupervisorgoincriticizingtheperformanceofasubordinate?Somehighlysuccessfulmanagershavebeenknowntorelyonverb
7、alabuseandintimidation.Doyouthinkthatthisisaneffectivemeansofcommunicatingexpectations?Ifnot,whatalternativeshouldamanageruseindealingwithsomeonewhoseworkislessthansatisfactory?Inconclusion,supervisorsshouldavoidusingverbalabuseandthreats.Thesemethodsdegradesubordinat
8、es,andtheyareunlikelytoproducethebestresultsinthelongrun.Itismorerespectful,andprobablymoreeffectiveoverall,tohandlecasesofs
