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1、Welcometoourclass!Writingskills(II)HowtomakeyourwritingmorebeautifulComparisonStep1Onhearingaterriblenoise,Tom,aseven-year-oldboy,whowaswatchingTVinthelivingroom,rushedoutimmediately,onlytofinditwasadaydream.Tomisaboy.Heissevenyearsold.HewaswatchingTVinthelivingroomwhenheheardaterribleno
2、ise.Herushedoutimmediately.Hefounditwasjustadaydream.句式单调结构松散断断续续吞吞吐吐句式灵活结构紧凑上下连贯一气呵成Ourmonitorisagirl.Sheisresponsibleforherworkandtakesgoodcareofherclassmates.Shestudiesveryhard.Sheisgoodatallthesubjects.Hermathsisespeciallygood.Shelikessports.sheisakeymemberofourvolleyballteam.Shehass
3、etagoodexampletous.行文松散不连贯Ourmonitorisagirl,whoisresponsibleforherworkandtakesgoodcareofherclassmates.ShestudiessohardthatSheisgoodatallthesubjects,especiallyhermaths.What’smore,Shelikessports.sheisakeymemberofourvolleyballteam.Inaword,Shehassetagoodexampletous.行文连贯表达流畅Whatcharacteristic
4、sdoyouthinkwell-writtenessaysshare?Summary英语高分书面表达的特点：1.准确性（不跑题，要点全，表达准确）2.条理性（合理布局文章结构，层次清楚）3.简洁多样性（语言简洁，句式多样）4.流畅性（行文连贯）5.美观性（书写规范整洁）4.流畅性（行文连贯）3.简洁多样性（语言简洁，句式多样）PracticeStep2展示个性亮而出众Section1Trytomakethefollowingsentencesmoreadvanced.1.Theteacherspeaksveryfast.Ican’tfollowher.~Theteach
5、erspeakssofastthatIcan’tfollow…~SofastdoestheteacherspeakthatIcan’t…展示个性亮而出众2.Exercisecanbuildupourbody.Itcanalsoreducediseases.~Exercisecannotonlybuildup…butalsoreduce…~Notonlycanexercisebuildup…butitcanalsoreduce…展示个性亮而出众3.Scroogewasveryrich,buthewasunhappy.~AlthoughScroogewasveryrich,
6、hewasunhappy.~Richas/thoughScroogewas,hewasunhappy.~DespitethefactthatScroogewasrich,he…~Inspiteof/Despitehisrichness,Scroogewas…~Scroogewasveryrich;hewasunhappy,though.展示个性亮而出众5.AterribleearthquakehitWenchuan.Itcausedenormouseconomiclossesandcountlessdeaths.~A…Wenchuan,whichcaused…~A…We
7、nchuan,causingenormouseconomiclossesandkillingcountlesspeople.~A…Wenchuan,causing…lossesandwithcountlesspeoplekilled.~A…Wenchuan.Asaconsequence,countlesspeoplegotkilledandmanymorebecamehomeless.展示个性亮而出众4.TheChineseathleteswonsomanygoldmedals.Itexcitedusall.~TheChinese…med
