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1、看图作文LookAndwriteLeadinHaveyoudonesomemeaningfulthingsrecently?Writeadiaryaccordingtothefollowingpictures.(假设这是你在3月9日（星期五）的一段亲身经历。)1.去看电影2.发现有人掉了箱子3.高喊失主4.乘车追赶5.以钱相谢：拒收Informationgotfromthewriting:Thetypeofthepassage(体裁):Diary(日记)2.Theperson(人称)：Thefirstperson(
2、第一人称)3.Thetense(时态)：Thesimplepasttense(一般过去式)文章的内容描述完整表达充分Pickupthekeywordsorphrasesineachpicture.我去看电影.gotoamovie/gotothecinema/seeafilmthisafternoon1.去看电影今天下午ThisafternoonIwenttoamovie.我看到一个箱子从一辆自行车上掉了下来.see/find+宾语+宾补falldownfromonthewayto2.发现有人掉了箱子在去电影院的路上
3、,Onthewaytothecinema,Ifoundacasefalldownfromaman’sbike.向那人大声喊叫,shoutto/atsb.pickupridefast;hear3.高喊失主我捡起箱子,但他骑得很快，没有听到。我捡起箱子,并向那人大声喊叫,但他骑得很快，没有听到。Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtotheman,butherodefastanddidn’thearme.我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.stop/takeataxirunafter4.乘车追赶于是，ThenI
4、stoppedataxitorunaftertheman.最终，我追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.失主拿钱来感谢我,但我拒绝了.catchupwithreturntakeoutsth.todosthrefuse5.以钱相谢：拒收最终,我追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.Atlast,Icaughtupwithhimandgavethecasebacktohim.失主拿钱来感谢我,但我拒绝了.Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.Makethesentencesintoapas
5、sage.Mar.9th,FridayFineIt’safinedaytoday.ThisafternoonIwenttoamovie.Ontheway,Ifoundacasefalldownfromaman’sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtotheman,butherodefastanddidn’thearme.ThenIstoppedataxitorunaftertheman.Atlast,Icaughtupwithhimandreturnthecasetohim.Theman
6、tookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.写看图作文的步骤：1.审题确定体裁,人称,时态等。2.找出关键词，连词成句。3.连句成文，注意连接词。4.反复审核，修改错误。Conclusion作文评分标准：内容完整，语句流畅，句式优美，无语法错误，书写规范，给14-15分；2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误,书写较规范，给10-13分；3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多,书写较规范，给5-9分；4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0
7、-4分。Inwhatwayscanwemakethepassageperfect?句子的种类灵活多样避免单一Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.Onethewaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffaman’sbike.IwasonmywaytothecinemathisafternoonwhenIhappenedtoseeacasefalloffaman’sbike.1.把多个句子合并成复合句Butherodefastanddidn’thearme.Butherodeto
8、ofasttohearme.IstoppedataxiasquicklyasIcouldinordertorunaftertheman.2.适当选择固定句型和短语Istoppedataxiquicklytorunaftertheman.文章结构首尾照应构思精巧Mar9th,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ont
