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1、学生作品1ManyThingscanAffectOurFeelingsInourdailylife,manythingsmayaffectourspirits.Suchasthedeliciousfoods,bigeventsandcolors.ButIthinkmusicandhomeworkcanaffectmyfeelingsoften.Musiccanchangemymoods.WhenIlistentothesadmusic,Iwillbecomeupset.ButwhenI’munhappy,Iwilllistentothepopmusic,thenIwillfee
2、lhappyagain.What’smore,Ithinkhomeworkcanalsoaffectmyfeelings.IfIhavetoomuchhomework,Iwillfeelupset.ButifIdon’thavehomework,Ifeelveryhappyandexcited.Inaword,musicandhomeworkcanaffectourfeelings.Solet’senjoythepopmusicandfinishthehomework,andbehappyeveryday..教师评语：1.Wonderful.2.Youarequiteaware
3、ofmakingmeaningfulsentences.3.Agoodbeginningandaperfectending.Youhavemadegreatprogressindevelopingapassage.学生作品2ManyThingscanAffectOurFeelingsManythingscanaffectourfeelings,suchasthebooksandthemusic.It’sveryimportantforustobeinagoodmood.Thebooksoftenchangemyfeelings.WhenIamreadinganinteresti
4、ngbook,Ilaughalot.ButifIreadasadbook,sadnessalwayscometome.Notonlythebooksbutalsothemusiccanaffectmymoods,WhenIlistentotherockmusic,Ioftenfeelexcited.WhenIhavetroublesleeping,Iwilllistentothesoftmusic.Itcanmakemerelaxedandsleepy.Inshort,lotsofthingscanaffectourfeelings.Soweshouldlearntocontr
5、olourfeelingsandtrytobehappyeveryday.教师评语：1.Excellent! 2.Allthepointshavebeencovered.Andyouarequiteawareofmakingmeaningfulsentences.Hardworkleadstosuccess.3.AndWhatawonderfulsentenceusing"make"and“whenI…”.学生作业3ManyThingscanAffectOurFeelingsManythingscanaffectourfeelingssuchasweather,colorsa
6、ndsoon.Ithinktheweathercanaffectmyfeeling.Whentheweatherissunny,Iwillfeelhappy.However,whentheweatherisrainy,I’llfeelsadandupset.Inaddition,thecolorscanalsoaffectmymoods.IfIweartheredclothes,I’llfeelexcited,butthecolorofbluewillmakemerelaxed.Manythingscanaffectus.Sowemusttakecareofourselves,
7、andstayinagoodmood.教师评语：1.Fantastic!2.It'sreallycleverofyoutoexpressyourownideas.3.Betterpaymoreattentiontotherelationshipbetweensentences.
