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1、EnglishwritingDongfengMiddleschoolbyZhangQinWhataretheydoing?Whyaretheyplantingtrees?Plantingtreesistoprotectourearth.Whyshouldweprotectourearth?beforebutnowbeforebutnowbutnowbeforebluesky,whitecloud,greenvillages.Isthescene(风景)beautiful?.bluesky,whitecloud,greenvillage
2、s.Isthescene(风景)beautiful?.writingHowtoprotectourearth?Howmanykeywordsandexpressionscanyouthinkofwhenyouseethetitle?Canyoumakesentenceswiththesewordsandexpressions?environmentalpollution,protecttheearth,cutdown,planttrees,savewater,turnoff,etc…WritingNotes:1.问题现状(Introd
3、uction开头)Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblemA,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First(说明A的现状).Second,___________(举例进一步说明现状)2.怎样解决(Mainbody主体)Firstofall,_____________(解决方法一).What’smore__________(解决方法二).Finally,__________(解决方法三).3.总结(Conclusion结尾)Nowadays,theenvironmental
4、pollutionismoreandmoreserious.Wehavenowatertodrinkbecauseofwaterpollution.Andwhentreesarecutdown,someanimalsdisappear.Thereismoreandmoredirtysmokeintheair.Therefore,it’stimeforustoprotectourearth.Thefirststeptoprotectourearth,Ithink,istoplantmoretreesandgrowmoregrass.Me
5、anwhile,savingwaterisimportant,too.Rubbishshouldn’tbethrowneverywhere,either.What’smore,weshouldstopfactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintotherivers.Finally,usethingsforaslongaspossible.Inaword,donotmakethelastplacewherewecanlivegray!It’sourdutytoprotecttheearthwell!Howtopro
6、tectourearth?4.Treesarecutdown.Someanimalsdisappear.Comparison(比较)1.Thewaterpollutionisserious.Wedon’thavewatertodrink.Inordertoliveabetterlife,it’stimeforustoprotectourearth.3.Weshouldplantmoretreesandgrowmoregrass.Thefirststeptoprotectourearth,Ithink,istoplantmoretree
7、sandgrowmoregrass.whentreesarecutdown,someanimalsdisapper.Wehavenowatertodrinkbecauseofwaterpollution.2.Wewanttoliveabetterlife.Weshouldprotectourearth.Howtowriteagoodcomposition?Discussion我来为你提供:(1)方法点拨:1审题:要求扣题发挥,不要离题万里。2构思:要用学过的词句表达,不要东拼西凑。注意开头、中间和结尾3动笔:注意:人称,数,大小写,标
8、点符号,时态,语态,用词,句型,词性4复合:要使内容连贯,句子通顺,语言流畅。5检查修改:用词用句是否合理,句子是否连贯。我来为你提供:(2)方法点拨:1.合理使用连接词(and,so,or,while…)2.适当使用承