Revision　module　B.ppt

《Revision　module　B.ppt》由会员上传分享，免费在线阅读，更多相关内容在教育资源-天天文库。

1、书面表达专讲合肥市第36中学刘元坤Writingskills书面表达六步法一、审题1.确定体裁和格式2.确定主体时态3.确定中心人称4.确定得分点2017年安徽省中考作文真题2017年安徽省中考作文参考答案1.befriendlyto.Sheisfriendlytoeveryoneatschool.Mydreamcametrue.2.bebadforEatingtoomuchisbadforourhealth.二、遣词造句步骤1.抓主干，定时态；2.套句型，连成句；二、遣词造句6.buy…forSheboughtsomepresentsforhermo

2、ther3.cometrue4.takesb.tohospitalWetookhimtohospital.Hewastakentohospital.5.flykitesTheywillflykitesintheparknextweek.姓名Phillips年龄12国家TheUSA爱好游泳、画画、照顾动物….周末活动帮助打扫动物园，为动物制作标志牌…..1.Phillips12岁了.Phillipsistwelveyearsold.2.他来自TheUSA.HecomesfromtheUSA.HeisanAmerican.3.他喜欢游泳.Helikesgo

3、ingswimming.4.他也喜欢画画.Healsolikesdrawing.5.他还喜欢照顾动物，等等。Helikestakingcareoftheanimals,andsoon.6.周末的时候他帮助打扫动物园。Heoftenhelpstocleanthezooattheweekend.7.他为动物制作标志牌。Heusuallymakessomesignalboardfortheanimalsattheweekends.姓名Phillips年龄12国家TheUSA爱好游泳、画画、照顾动物….周末活动帮助打扫动物园，为动物制作标志牌…..Philli

4、psandAnimalSignsManyteenagersloveanimals.Phillipsisoneofthem.EthanPhillipsistwelveyearsold.Heisastudent.Hestudiesinamiddleschool.HecomesfromtheUSA.HeisanAmerican.Helikesgoingswimming.Healsolikesdrawing.Helikestakingcareoftheanimals,andsoon.Heoftenhelpstocleanthezooattheweekend.H

5、eusuallymakessomesignalboardfortheanimalsattheweekends.三、成文创设好的开端,适当使用一些关联词，把材料按一定的逻辑顺序串联起来，使之连贯,首尾要注意呼应,使文章结构完整.EveryoneshouldlearnfromPhillips,weshouldtakecareoftheanimals,theanimalsareourfriends.Let’sdoittoday.四.修改注意事项1.时态是否正确;2.主谓是否一致;3.要点是否全面;4.人称是否正确;5.语序问题;6.是否符合语言习惯;7.固定

6、短语。1.He’shobbyisplaybasketball.3.Heoftenbybiketoschool.hisplayinghisplayingHishobbyisplayingbasketball.Thoughwereweretired,wehadagoodtime.Heoftengoestoschoolbybike.Heoftentakesabiketoschool4.Myhometowninsummerhasmanybeautifulflowers.Therearemanybeautifulflowersinmyhometowninsumm

7、er.火眼金睛，洞察秋毫2.Thoughweweretired,butwehadagoodtime.实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练5.Iverylikemakingfriendswithyou.Ilikemakingfriendswithyouverymuch.6.IwatchingTVnow.IamwatchingTVnow.7.Therewillhaveabigpartyintheparktomorrow.8.Theywerehadapicnicintheparkyesterday.Therewillbeabigpartyinthepar

8、ktomorrow.Theyhadapicnicintheparkyesterday.火眼金睛