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1、中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（10-12分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富，但能满足任务的要求；句子较通顺、表达较清楚；有少量语言错误；书写工整；字数基本符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。中考作文评分标准第三档（7-9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但
2、覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语言结构单一；句子不够通顺，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多；书写不够工整，字数较少。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（0-6分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；应用的语言结构单一且不规范；句子不通顺，行文不连贯；语言错误多；书写潦草，字数不足50。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。五、书面表达(共15分)还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某英文报纸正在以“Anunforgettableexperience”为题进行征文活动。请你写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你
3、的感想。参考词语：remember,help,wonderful,feel,thinkAnUnforgettableExperienceEveryonehassomeunforgettableexperiences.___________________________AnUnforgettableExperienceEveryonehassomeunforgettableexperiences.Lasttermmylegwasbadlyhurtinafootballmatch,andIhadtostayinbedfortwoweek
4、s.WhileIwasworryingaboutschoolworkathome,myclassmateTomcametohelpme.Hetoldmewhattheteachertaughtinclass,andhelpedmealotwithmymathproblems.IwasdeeplymovedbecausehekeptteachingmeuntilIreturnedtoschool.Iwasgladthatwithhishelp,Icaughtupwithmyclassmatesatlast.Fromthenon,webe
5、camebestfriends.Itrulyunderstoodthatafriendinneedisafriendindeed.AnUnforgettableExperienceEveryonehassomeunforgettableexperiences.Iwillneverforgetmyfirstvolunteerwork.Lastsummer,ourclasswenttoacountryprimaryschooltohelpthestudentsthere.First,wegaveawaysomebooksandstatio
6、nerytothem.Thenwetalkedaboutschoollife.Iwasquiteshybefore,buttomysurprise,Italkedwithsomestudentsforalmostanhourwithoutintermission.Isharedmyeffectivestudymethodswiththemexcitedly.Finally,weplayedgamestogether.Allofusfeltsohappy.Bydoingthevolunteerwork,Inotonlygainedhap
7、piness,butalsobecamemoreconfident.Itmademeexperiencethatgivingisreceiving.Lastsummer,ourclasswenttoacountryprimaryschooltohelpthestudentsthere.总起First,wegaveawaysomebooksandstationerytothem.Thenwetalkedaboutschoollife.Iwasquiteshybefore,buttomysurprise,Italkedwithsomest
8、udentsforalmostanhourwithoutintermission.Isharedmyeffectivestudymethodswiththemexcitedly.Lasttermmylegwasbadly
