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1、托福写作辅导材料托福作文任务描述：托福作文要求参加考试者在30分钟内进行审题、写作和检杏等。写作的字数为220至300字。分数段：0分，1分，1.5分，2分，25分，3分，3.5分，4分，4.5分，5分，5.5分，6分。写作要求：6分：Demonstrateclearcompetenceinwritingonboththerhetoricalandsyntacticlevels,thoughitmayhaveoccasionalerrors.能展示出较高的写作能力，在修辞和句法等方面达到定的水平，文章允许出现个别错

2、误。•Effectivelyaddressesthewritingtask文章切题，观点明确；•Wellorganizedandwelldeveloped段落组织冇序，合理展开说明；•Usesclearappropriatedetailstosupportathesisorillustrateideas使用正确的事例支持论点或说明观点；•Displaysconsistentfacilityintheuseoflanguage能够流畅地，连贯地使用语言•Demonstratesyntacticvarietyandap

3、propriatewordchoice・句式多样，用词准确。5分：Demonstratecompetenceinwritingonboththerhetoricalandsyntacticlevels,thoughitwillprobablyhaveoccasionalerrors在修辞.句法方面有一定的表达能力，但文章偶然会有错误。•mayaddressessomepartsofthewritingtaskmoreeffectivelythanothers能有效地按照要求协作，但某些部分冇欠缺；•generall

4、ywellorganizedandwelldeveloped段落组织基本有序，合理展开说明；•UsescleardetailstosupportathesisorMustrateanideas能使丿IJ事例支持论点或说明观点；•Displaysfacilityintheuseoflanguage展现出语言的使用能力；•Demonstratesomesyntacticvarietyandrangeofvocabulary.冇些句式和词汇的变化。4分：demonstrateminimalcompetenceinwrit

5、ingonboththerhetoricalandsyntacticallevels展示出一些写作能力修辞与句法能力一般。•Addressesthewritingtopicadequatelybutmayslightlypartsofthetask•Isadequatelyorganizedanddeveloped•Usessomedetailstosupportathesisorillustrateanidea•Demonstrateadequatebutpossiblyinconsistentfacilityw

6、ithsyntaxandusage•Maycontainsomeerrorsthatoccasionallyobscuremeaning3分：demonstratesomedevelopingcompeteneeinwriting,butitremainsflawedoneithertherhetoricalorsyntacticallevel,orboth.•Inadequateorganizationordevelopment•Inappropriateorinsufficientdetailstosuppor

7、torillustrategeneralizations•Anoticeableinappropriatechoiceofwordsorwordforms•Anaccumulationoferrorsinsentencestructureand/orusage・2分：suggestsincompeteneeinwriting•Seriousdisorganizationorunderdevelopment•Littleornodetail,orirrelevantspecifics•Seriousandfreque

8、nterrorsinsenteneestructureorusage•Seriousproblemswithfocus1分：demonstrateincompetenceinwriting•Maybeincoherent•Maybeunderdeveloped•Maycontainsevereandpersistentwritingerrors评分：TWE—