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1、奖学金申请书范文解析 GrowingupinamodestvillageinChina,Ihardlyeverhadthechancetoseemanyexamplesofmoderntechnology;peoplewhodigwellsbyhandtoobtaindrinkingwateranduseox-drivenplowstocultivatetheirfieldsdon’thavemuchusefortelevisioandpersonalputers.Butwhenmyfatherg
2、avemeanoldradiotoplaywith,Iwantednothingmorethantotakeapartthecontraptionandseewhatiidemadesuchinterestingsounds.Sittingonthefloorwithaconfusedgrin,surroundedbywiresandmetal,Ilookedupatmyfatherandaskedwherethenoiseswere...(有删节) 合理地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的动机,学习动机
3、是评审委员非常看中的。同时,读了这段文字,会使读者沉浸在对童年往事的美好回忆里,借此打动评审委员的心。 另外一篇修改过的文章开头用诗一般的语言写道(有删节): ......IfirstreadthisparagraphfromMadameCurieasa14-year-oldchild,andIstillrememberhowwonderfulIfelt.Irememberthinking,"Whatesteemedmentheywere!Howhardtheyworked!"AsIgrew
4、older,thisparagraphbecameasourceofencouragementinthefaceofadversity.Ibegintofeelamagicalbluelighttwinklinginmyheart,kindlingaloveofscience,andencouragingmetochargebravelyintotheunknownworld. 结尾呼应了开头,阐述了作者为什么要去美国读书: Ineverforgotmyadolescentidol,Mari
5、aCurie.AsIre-readthebook,anotherpaageleapedout:"Shewasnow24-anagewhensomeofhergreatcontemporariesweretobeonthebrinkofmajordiscoveries...MariatookthetrainfromWarsawtoParis,theintellectualMea." Forme,theintellectualMeaistheUnitedStates....Ihopetocontinu
6、emystudyandresearch,asdetailedbelow.Oneday,Ihopetofindthepureestheticsofbiologyandreachitsluminoussummits. 我们可以想象地到,评审委员在读了这位女士的申请文章以后,脑海里肯定能栩栩如生地浮现出一个好学上进、充满远大抱负的未来女科学家的形象,怎么会不拍案叫绝,全力帮助这个女士登上前往学术圣地美丽坚的飞机,成为第二个居里夫人呢?
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