The Sunshine in My Life~16A09.ppt

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1、TheSunshineinMyLifeNo.52MiddleSchoolZhouHuijuan每个人的成长过程中，都有很多影响自己的人。和父母、老师、朋友分享自己的快乐烦恼，互相支持鼓励，让你的生活充满阳光。请以“TheSunshineinMyLife”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，叙述一件你和他（们）一起经历过的事，及这件事给你的感悟。AnalysisofwritingGroup1审题体裁：时态：列提纲Beginning：Body：Ending:每个人的成长过程中，都有很多影响自己的人。和父母、老师、朋友分享自己的快乐烦恼，

2、互相支持鼓励，让你的生活充满阳光。请以“TheSunshineinMyLife”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，叙述一件你和他（们）一起经历过的事，及这件事给你的感悟。审题体裁：情感表达类记叙文时态：过去时，一般现在时列提纲Beginning：交代人物，点题Body：叙述一件发生过的事（你的烦恼，父母、老师或朋友给你的鼓励）Ending:首尾呼应，感悟AnalysisofwritingGroup1TheSunshineinMyLifeMybodypart:tellastoryProblemsIhave:havedifficult

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