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1、生命是永恒不断的创造,因为在它内部蕴含着过剩的精力,它不断流溢,越出时间和空间的界限,它不停地追求,以形形色色的自我表现的形式表现出来。泰戈尔分析比较5分和7分作文TopicInternationaltourismhasbroughtenormousbenefittomanyplaces.Atthesametime,thereisconcernaboutitsimpactonlocalinhabitantsandtheenvironment・Dothedisadvantagesofinternationaltourismoutweighthedisadvantage
2、s?APoorEssay一Thefollowingisaband5essay.Internationaltourismhasbroughtenormousbenefittomanyplaces.Atthesametime,thereisconcernaboutitsimpactonlocalinhabitantsandtheenviroriment.Dothedisadvantagesofinternationaltourismoutweightheadvantages?Inmyopinionadvantagesoutweightthedisadvantages・F
3、irstly,manycountrieslikeEgyptorTailandlivefromtourismLotsofpeopleworkthereasaseilsmensortouristguides・Thesecountrieswithoutsupportoftouristswouldn'tbeabletofuntcionproperly.Secondly,incountriesvisitedbytouristsareplentyofplaceswherepeoplejustcan,tpassbecauseofrareanimalsorplants.Anothe
4、rthingisthatpeopleliketravelingandseeingnewexoticplaces・Theylikelieonthebeachorswiminocean.Furthermore,tourismisnowmoregrowingindustryhigheringtousandsofpeople・Therearemakeingnewplacestoworkandtohavefun.Butontheotherhand,peopleoftenforgetthattheyaren,ttheonlybeingsontheplanet・Manytouri
5、stsarelivinggarbagejustanywhere・Someofthemwan,tanexoticsouvenirsotheypayforillegalthingslikedeadorliveanimalsorsomesculpture.TosumupIthinkinternationaltravelingisagoodthingbutpeoplemustrealisethatthereissomethingelsebesidesthem.Theyneedtoknowthatfloraandfaunaneedstobeprotected・Peopleha
6、vetoenjoytheirholidaysbutalsoprotectenvironment・Belowisananalysisofthisessay.TaskResponse・Theessayquestionhasbeencopiedandusedastheintroduction(paragraph1).Oncethese34wordsaretakenoffthewordcount,theresponseisunderlengthat194wordsandsolosesmarks・Nevertheless,thetopicisaddressedandarele
7、vantpositionisexpressed,althoughtherearepatches-asinthethirdparagraph-wherethedevelopmentisunclear・Otherideasaremorerelevantbutaresometimesinsufficientlydeveloped.CoherenceandCohesion.Thecandidate,sideasareclearlyorganised,andthereisanoverallprogressionwithintheresponse・Thereissomeef
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