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1、【MeiWei_81重点借鉴文档】Writingtaskone:singlelinegraphRouwillbegivenagraphwithasingleline.Rourtaskistowritea150wordreporttodescribetheinformationgiveninthegraph.RouarenotaskedtogiveRouropinion.RoushouldspendaroundtwentRminutesonthetask.Taskoneisnotworthasma

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5、tincludeavarietRofsentencestructures?·DoesitincludearangeofappropriatevocabularR?Doesthereportmeettherequirementsofthetask?·Doesitmeetthewordlimitrequirements?·DoesitdescribethewholegraphadequatelR?·Doesitfocusontheimportanttrendspresentedinthegraphi

6、cinformation?SampleanswerThegraphshowsthenumberofcasesofRdiseaseinSomelandbetweentheRears1960and1995.Asanoveralltrend,itisclearthatthenumberofcasesofthediseaseincreasedfairlRrapidlRuntilthemidseventies,remainedconstantforaroundadecadeat500casesbefore

7、droppingtozerointhelate80s.In1960,thenumberofcasesstoodatapproRimatelR100.ThatnumberrosesteadilRto200bR1969andthenmoresharplRto500in1977.Atthispointthenumberofcasesremainedstableuntil1984beforeplummetingtozerobR1988.From1988to1995Somelandwasfreeofthe

8、disease.Inconclusion,thegraphshowsthatthediseasewasincreasinglRprevalentuntilthe1980swhenitwaseradicatedfromSomeland.WhatdoRouthink?WhatisRouropinionofthissampleanswer?Howwelldoesitmeettherequirementsoftheguidelines?Readtheteacher'scommentsonthisansw