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1、Summary阅读材料文体:说明文说明文概括四个模板:模板1.“对象+性质功用+利好”模板2.“问题+解决方法”模板3.“现象+原因+结果”模板4.“现象+影响”Summary要点:现象:HighschoolstudentsinWesterncountries…haveapromtomarktheirgraduation原因/意义:1.It’stomarkthetimekidsturnintoyoungmenandwomen.2.Itmeanstheyarenolonger…dependent…过程:第二段(由于本文不是记叙文,“过程”并不是最重要的,需要高度概括)summar
2、y:HighschoolstudentsinWesterncountriescelebratetheirgraduationbyhavingapromwheretheydressup,havefunandsaygoodbyetoeachother.Promshelptomarktheirindependenceonparentsandteachers.SummaryInwesterncountries,thereisusuallyapromheldforhighschoolstudentstomarktheirgraduationandindependence,wherethe
3、graduatesdressinformalclothesandhavefuntogether.(30words)刘瑜主体部分存在的主要问题审题不够仔细,漏写题目;审题不认真,不按题目要求,写了不该写的,该写的又没写,离题;把“你理想的毕业庆祝活动”写成“你想怎样庆祝你的毕业”;立意太“庸俗”,大部分作文的主题为“吃喝玩乐”;“原因理由”不够充分。1.你理想的毕业庆祝活动是怎样的?Therearemanywaystocelebrategraduationincludinghavingphotostakenwithyourclassmatesandteaches,ordining
4、outtogetherandexchangegifts.Tomarkthesignificanceofgraduation,Iwouldcalluponmyfellowstudentstodonateusefulreferencebookstotheschoollibrary.2.请详细叙述你的理由:Theadvantagesofdonatingreferencebooksarefar-reaching,inthefirstplace,itisthefinalcontributionwecanpossiblemaketotheschoollibrarywhichweoweagr
5、eatdebtofgratitudeinthepastthreeyears.Moreover,thestudentparticipantslearnandpracticetheideasof“togiveisbetterthantoreceive”.Lastbutnotleast,wecanneverfailtounderstandthatresourcesaremoreefficientlyrecycledinthewaythatmoneyissavedforthosewhoneedreferencebooks.Wecouldn’tgrowuphappilyandhealth
6、ilywithouttheirlove,soit’shightimeweshouldconveyourgratitudetothem.詹咏桐Asforme,Iprefertotraveltogetherasacelebrationofourgraduation.Wecantraveltogethertosomeplacenearbywithmanyplacesofinterest.陈嘉宇Whenitcomestomyideaofgraduationcelebration,Iwouldlikemyschoolmatestodosomevoluntarywork,whichisme
7、aningfultoboththesocietyandourselves.陈楚嫣Apartfromgainingknowledgefrombooks,weshouldalsolearnfromsocialactivitieslikeparticipatinginvoluntarywork,whichwillhelpenrichourlifeandbroadenourhorizon.陈楚嫣Afterwegraduate,wemayrarelyseeourclassmatesandteacher
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