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1、1、描述（description）地理位置（location）环境（environment）硬件（hardware）景象（scene）……2、阐述理由（reasons）Whatattractsyoutogothere?Whatcanyougainbygoingthere?GoodTopics:LibraryMuseumCinemaParkSupermarketBook-storeCoffeebarCountrysideBeach……BrokenTopics:HomeSchoolNewYork……Topic&Structure:Beginning:1.由社会需求引入话题：Withthef
2、astpaceoflife,peoplearemoreandmoreconcernedabouttheirownintervalwell-being,thustheyfloodintobooks.Soitiswithme.IreceivedalibrarycardforShanghaiLibraryasagiftonmy12thbirthdayparty,andfromthenonithasbecomeashelterformyspirit.2.巧设情景，自然引入：Believeitornot,ifyouwanttofindmeafterclass,gostraighttothesch
3、oollibrarycrossingtheteachingbuildings.Neverwillyouoverreachmethere,whereIcangaincomfort,peaceandrefreshment.（by高三7徐楠）Beginning:3.运用比喻，生动直观：Thatplaceislikeathickforest—themomentyoustepintoit,ajourneyoflearningandadventuringbegins.Thatplaceislikeanenergystation—mylifebatterywillbefullychargedtofa
4、cevariouschallenges.（by高三7高妍沁）4.适当描写，切入正题：Piledwithvariousbooksfromliteraturetomilitary,fullofyoungpeoplewhothirstforknowledge,equippedwithcomputersandair-conditioners,thelibraryiswhereIliketostaymost!（by高三7姚霁霏）Description&Reasons:AsI’mhere,Ifeelitlikemyhome.Almostvariousbooksareagreeabletomytas
5、te.Thelibraryisaquiteplace,whichprovidesmewithfreedomfromannoyingnoises.Withoutputtingonafakemask,smilingfromthebottomofmyheart,Iammakingatripinaworldofknowledgewithmybelovedsilentfriends,books.Thebooksinthelibrarygrantmethewingstoflyintheskyandenjoythefreshair.IcanlearnwhatIcan’tgainfromclass.I
6、fIjustconcentrateontheknowledgemyteachersgiveme,mycomprehensivelevelwillbelimited.Awiderangeofscientificphenomenaandliteraturesareconcealedinbooks,waitingforme.Description&Reasons:5.Icantravelaroundthewholeworldeventheentireuniversewiththethrillingexcitementofhumanculture,civilizationandspaceexp
7、lorationtouchingmyheart.Icantalktothemostrespectablewave-ridersincludinggreatempires,poetsandscientistsinthelongcourseofhumanhistory.6.Libraryprovidesmewitharelaxingenvironmenttostudyandtothink,quietandcomfortable.Sodoesital
