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1、Teachingaim:GuidethestudentsinimprovingtheirEnglishwriting.漂亮规范的书写是写作得分的亮点Factor1：作文的卷面和书写Factor2：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;A.Examples1．_______替换becauseof2._________________替换thinkof3．______________替换should4.______替换spend5．___________替换behelpful/u
2、seful6．_______替换talkabout/of,mentiondevotebesupposedtoduetocontributetocomeupwith/occurreferto1.Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.(NMET2008)2.Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscove
3、redinthetalk.(2009全国卷Ⅲ)B.改变句型结构,与众不同practice1.Hegotexcitedwhenheheardthenews.→______thenews,hegotexcited.2.Thegirlwenthome,becauseshewashungryandthirsty.→_________________,thegirlwenthome.HearingHungryandthirsty3.Radiobroadcastsdidn’tbeginuntil1920.→Itwas_______________
4、_______________.4.Heneverspeaksabouthisownfamily.→Never__________________________.notuntil1920thatradiobroadcastsbegandoeshespeakabouthisownfamilySample:Thesetopics,Ithink,areverypopularwithusstudents.What'smore,therearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusund
5、erstandEnglishbetter.However,someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus.Therefore,I'dliketosuggestchangingthemintoeasierones.Factor3：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词、插入语等and,then,also,besides,morever,what'smorefurthermore,inaddition,morethanthat...1.表递进２
6、.表转折３.表因果４.表目的５.表归纳but,however,although,though,inspiteof,despiteafterall,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand...because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequentlyasaresult/consequence,onaccountof...inorderthat,sothat,forthepurposeof...ingeneral,inbrief,inshort,inconclusion,inaw
7、ord,onthewhole...WilliamShakespeare（2008湖南卷）Ilikehimbecausehiscomediesandtragediesbringmeintoafantasticworld;IlovehimbecausehispoemsletmeenjoythebeautyoftheEnglishlanguage;Iadmirehimbecausehiskeensightssetmethinkingandteachmehowtoleadameaningfullife!Factor4：作者表达的思想和情感小结
8、：1.作文的卷面-----整洁、规范2.文章的语言-----丰富、多变3.行文的表达-----流畅、连贯4.文章的思想-----独到、新颖5：FivestepsReviewthetopic(审)Listthepoints
