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1、第一节时间空间顺序法1、讲述故事或叙述事件时,最简单最清楚的方法就是按照时间顺序来描述事情的发展过程:先发生的先写,后发生的后写。例如:1)Thelastpersontoapproachthecouplewasashort,elderlywomanwhosmiledasshecongratulatedthem—notbynamebutasHwifeHand"husband:"I'mAuntEstherGubbins,Hshesaid.nFmheretotellyouyouaregoingtoliveagoodlifeandbehappy・Youwillworkhardandl
2、oveeachothc匚”Thenquickly,forsuchashort,portly,elderlyperson,shedisappeared.2)Oneeveningherhusbandhadfallenasleepwhilereadingaspynovel.Shewroteanoteontheenvelopeandleftitonhisbook:”Husband,IhavegonenextdoortohelpMrs.Nortonwithhersickchildren/1Thenextmorningshesawhehadwrittenbelowhermessage:”
3、Wife,Imissedyou.YouthoughtIwasasleep,butIwasjustrestingmyeyesandthinkingaboutthatpeculiarwomanwhotalkedtousinchurchalongtimeago.Ithasalwaysseemedtomethatshewasthewrongshapeforaheavenlymessenger.Anyway,ifstimetostopwonderingwhethershecamefromheavenoranearbytown.Whatmattersisthis:whoevershewa
4、s,AuntEstherGubbinswasright/*请看以下段落分析:Sandywalkedintothebathroomandturnedontheshowe匚Atfirst,thewaterfeltcold.Ithelpedherwakeup.Then,asthewatergothotter,shethought,”ThisshowerfeelsgreatandinhereIcanbealoneandsing・Noonedisturbsmeinhere.”Shegrabbedthesoapandwashedthoroughly,includingherhai匚Ifs
5、hestayedintheshowertoolong,hermomordadusuallybangedonthedoortorushhersoshegrabbedatowelanddriedoff.Intheparagraph,theauthordescribesSandy'sseriesofactionsaccordingtotheorderofthesequence:thefirstthingfirstandthesecondthingsecond.HereisachartofthefirstfewsentencesjusttoshowSandy'sactionsthat
6、havebeenlinkedtogetherwithtimemarkers・TimemarkersSequencedactionsSandywalkedintothebathroom.andturnedontheshowe匚Atfirst,shewokeupwiththehelpofthecoldwate匚Then,shethought.常见的病例评析:病例一:WhenwecamebackfromthestorethatChristmasEve,IrealizedIhadbeengiventoomuchchangefrommyfinalpurchase.Ishowedthem
7、oneytomybrotherandthentomyfathcr.Myfatherdidn'tlikeitandhemademegivebackthemoney.Mybrothersandsistersalllaughedatme.1shouldhavereturnedthemoneymyselfwithoutfather'shavingtotellme.上而这篇短文试图叙述作者生活中发生的一件重要事情,但原文中有许多不足之处。文章中没冇对话,没冇高潮,只是对故事进行了简单的描写,忽略了许多重要的细节。