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1、外研社必修1佳作展示与背诵写作指导Module1MyFirstDayatSeniorHighSectionIVWriting写作指导I•佳作展示与背诵假设你叫李华,是一名高一新生,对新学校的一切都感到新鲜和好奇。请根据下而的捉示以及图画给你的美国网友Peter发一封电子邮件,向他描述你在高小第-天的所见、所闻及所想。要点如下:◊袄园位置:位于山脚下,它后面有一个公园;校门前有一•条宽敞的街道直通商业区(businessdistrict)o◊校园内:中心有一个喷泉(fountain)和一而国旗,教学楼和多媒体
2、教宗(multimediaclassroom)引人注目・,到处是花,树木成荫。◊师生情况:老师和学生祁很友好。◊整体感受:注S:1.词数:100左右;2.文章开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。发件人:Lihua1980@163.com收件人:Peter1994@yahoo.com主题:myfirstdayatseniorhigh添加附件丄DearPeter,Howareyou?IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyfirstdayatmySeniorH
3、ighschool.■•••Bestwishes,Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:发件人:Lihua1980@163.com收件人:Peterl994@yahoo.com主题:myfirstdayatseniorhigh添加附件丄内容:DearPeter,Howareyou?IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyfirstdayatmySeniorHighschool.Mynewschoolislocatedatthefootofamountain.Behi
4、ndtheschoolliesabeautifulparkandawideroadbeforeourschoolgaterunstothebusinessdistrict.EnteringtheschoobIfirstsawafountainandthenationalflaginthecentre.Flowersandrowsoftreescanbeseeneverywhere.Itisbeautifulandamazing・Whatimpressedmemostwasthemodernteachingb
5、uildingsandmultimediaclassrooms.Whattheteachertaughtallappearedonthescreeninthefixmtoftheclassroom.Theteachersandtheclassmateswereallkindandhelpful.Ibelievethatwithexcellentteachershelpingme,Iwillmakegreatprogressinthewonderfulschool.Bestwishes,Yours,LiHua
6、I.思路点拨1.本文的格式为电了邮件,其内容为“我在新高中的第一天",主要运用记叙加描写的形式。2•时态上记叙“第一天”发生的情况要用一般过去时,描写学校及老师、同学的通常情况,白己的感受时用一般现在时态。3.写出的文章可分为三部分,笫一段介绍学校的位置及周边环境。笫二部分介绍校园布局及师生状况。授后一部分写出“我”的感受。4.(1)札I关常用短语①描写地点和.方位:inthemiddleof,infrontof,behind,between,nextto,ontheleftlies/standsin…,b
7、elocated/situatedin…,atthefootof,inthecenter,On/Totheeast/westis/lies...②相关建筑物:nationalpark,businessdistrict,fountain,garden,teachingbuilding,multimediaclassroom,officebuilding,library,lecturehalhsciencelaboratory,artroom,dormitory,medicalcentre,gym,cantee
8、n,garden...③才11关形容词:new,beautiful,wide,small,lovely,amazing,modern,kind,helpful,excellent,wonderfuLclose・・・④其他:enter,impress,appear,tellEnglishjokes,makeprogress・・•-(2)相关常用句型©Theschoolislocated/situatedat・■・②