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1、专题八写作指导之语言的锤炼一、请您写下您平时使用的让文章富有文采的方法._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2、_______________________________________________________________________________________________二、典型例题1.请您比较,两组句子中哪个句子对景物的描写更为贴切传神,并简述理由？①A:月光如流水一般,照在这一片叶子上.青雾升起在荷塘里.B:月光如流水一般,静静地泻在这一片叶子上.薄薄的青雾浮起在荷塘里.②A:每个晚上,山下亮起灯火,山上闪出灯光.B:每个夜幕深垂的晚上,山下亮起灿烂的万家灯火,山上闪出疏落的灯光.__
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4、_________________________________________________________2.请您赏析,本段文字妙处之所在,体会语言的生动性.一张小小的红叶儿,听了狡猾的西风劝告,私下离开母枝出来玩耍,走到半路上,风偷偷儿地溜走了,他便一跤跌在溪水里.溪水是怎样的开心啊,她将那可怜的迷路的小红叶,推推挤挤地推到一个旋涡里,使他滴滴溜溜地打圆转儿；那叶向前不得,向后不能,急得几乎哭出来；水笑嘻嘻,将手一松,他才一溜烟逃走了.________________________________
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6、___________________________一、巩固练习请您写作,请综合运用锤炼语言的方法,将下列两段文字变得丰富,并使之更有文采.1.春天来了,万物复苏.风儿在吹,雨儿在下,花儿在笑,小溪在流……你听,多美！___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.我们做任何事情,都要有毅力.因为人总有困难.在挫折面前,只有具有毅力,才能成功；如果没有毅力,那就只能失败.________________________________
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