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1、高中生英语写作典型错误例析甘肃省兰州市第六中学段生荣在长期的英语教学实践中,特别是在指导学生写作和批改他们的习作时,笔者接触到不少学生常犯的错误。这些错误往往具有相当的普遍性,主要表现在词性不明、措词不当、用法不妥、重复累赘、句法混乱、中式英语、拼写与标点有误等。下文通过整理归类,列举正误例句,详加解读诠释,指出错误所在,总结其规律性,以便能帮助学生甄别、改正或避免此类错误的发生,尽快提高其英语书面语言的准确表达能力。一、词性不明1.【误】Everyoneinmyfamilyislikethedog.【正】Everyonein
2、myfamilylikesthedog.【解析】作者的原意是:我们全家都喜欢(这只)狗。可错误例句所传递的信息却是:我们全家都像狗!英语中的like主要用作动词(“喜欢”)、名词(“爱好”)形容词和介词(“像”)。弄清“like众兄弟”(like,unlike,dislike,likely,alike,looklike,wouldlike,feellike)的词性和搭配很有必要,以便做到触类旁通。2.【误】Ourschoollibraryisopenedfrom9amto7pmfromMondaytoFridayandclos
3、edonweekends.【正】Ourschoollibraryisopenfrom9amto7pmfromMondaytoFridayandclosedonweekends.【解析】open既可用作动词、名词,还可以用作形容词。3.【误】Thosewhostronglyagainsttheideathinkanimalswilllosetheirfreedomandnatureifcagedinthezoo.【正】Thosewhoarestronglyagainsttheideathinkanimalswilllosethe
4、irfreedomandnatureifcagedinthezoo.【解析】误将介词作动词:against(“反对")在英文屮是介词而不是动词,用介词表达动作意义,要加助动词be;for为英反义词,意为“同意4•【误】Withmoreandmorecarscomeintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.【正】Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprov
5、edourlife.【正】Asmoreandmorecarscomeintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.【解析】误把介词当连词:①"随着"with…as;②“像—样"like…as;③“当”during…when;④"因为”becauseof—because;⑤"尽管”inspiteof/despite…though;⑥“为了”inorderto—inorderthato前者为(短语)介词,后跟名词或名词性短语,后者是从属连词,接状语从句。5.【误
6、】Inmyopinion,cheatinginexaminationsisunfairforthoseworkhardstudents・【正】Inmyopinion,cheatinginexaminationsisunfairforthosehard-workingstudents.【解析】hardwork(adj.+n.名词短语),workhard(v.+adv.动词短语),hard-working(adj.合成形容词)。词性容易搞混的还有good/well,health/healthy,relax/relaxed,than
7、k/thanks/thankful,pass/passed/past等。二、措词不当1・【误】NotuntilIgotbacktothehoteldidIrealizeIhadforgottenmyluggageinthetaxi.【正】NotuntilIgotbacktothehoteldidIrealizeIhadleftmyluggageinthetaxi.【解析】表示把某物“遗忘,落下”,句中有地点状语时要用leaveo2.【误】Underthehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers,Imanage
8、dtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed・【正】Withthehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers,ImanagedtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed.【正】Thankstothehelpofmycla