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1、浙江奉化市2016高考英语书面表达选编（3）及参考范文2016书面表达训练请以"TheBenefitsofFailure"为题，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文发表到校英语报上。要点如下：1.列举实例；2.认识变化；3.态度转变。注意：1.词数120字左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：激励motivate【参考范文】TheBenefitsofFailureAlthoughnobodywantstoexperieneefailure,failureplaysanimportantroleonthewaytosuccess.Sometimes,failureca
2、nbenefitusalot.WhenIfailedmyEnglishexamlastterm,Ifeltupsetatfirst,butthenImadeupmymindtostudyevenharder」twasthatfailurethatmotivatedmetoputmoretimeandenergyintolearningthissubject.What'smore,Ifounditwasmysmallvocabularyandpoorgrammarthatledtomyfailure.SoIchangedmylearningmethods.FinallyIm
3、adegreaterprogressinEnglishthanbefore.Mostimportantly,nowIhaveacorrectattitudetowardsfailure.Allinall,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Itreallyhelpedmetogetclosertosuccess.【思路点拨】范文开篇点题使用了短语"playanimportantrole,onthewayto"。紧接着,按照写作要求，结合自己亲身经历举例证明失败的好处。在举例时对时态的把握准确，对过去事情的描述用一般过去时。使用了一系列衔接词/zatfi
4、rst,butthenWhat'smore,Finally,Mostimportantly",句与句之间衔接自然顺畅。最后，用名人名言"失败乃成功之母〃点明文章主题。范文句式多变.When引导的时间状语从句,强调句型Itwasthatfailurethatmotivatedmetoputmoretimeandenergyintolearningthissubjecto书面表达[2014-江西省南昌市高三二模】iPad已成为中学生的新宠，它不仅可以听音乐，阅读电子书，而且还可以玩电子游戏。假如你是南昌某高中学生李华，请你用英语给英语报社写一封信，谈谈你对自己周围学生使用iP
5、ad的情况的看法。信的内容必须包括以下几点：1.使用iPad对学习的好处；2.对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负而影响；1.提出自己的建议。注意：词数120左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor,I'maseniorhighschoolstudentinNanchang,namedLiHua.NowmanystudentshaveiPadsandthinkit'safashiontousethem.Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearEditor,FmaseniorhighschoolstudentinNanchang,namedL
6、iHua.NowmanystudentshaveiPadsandthinkit'safashiontousethem.UsinganiPad,wecanlistentomusic,downloadalotoflearningmaterialsandreadthemonthescreen.Apparently,itishelpfultoourstudy,especiallytoourEnglishlistening・Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPadstoclassroomsandlistentomusicwithearphones,wh
7、ichmakestheteacherandotherstudentsgreatlyannoyed.Whatworse,someofthemevenwasteprecioustimeinclassplayingvideogames.Inmyopinion,asastudent,weshouldmakegooduseofiPads.Theclassroomisaplaceforstudentstostudy,andtherefore,concentrationisbadlyneededforustolearnourlessons
