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1、看图作文：优秀作文欣赏（话题：下定决心才能成功）Inthepicturewecanseethatasnailfindsatreewithgreenleavesonthetop.Attractedbythedeliciousleaves,thesnailimmediatelysetsaboutclimbing.Ittriesitsbestbutstillfailstogettothetop.Itfallsoffthetreeandbumps(碰撞)intotheground,painfulanddizzy.Nevertheless(然而),itdoesn’tloseh
2、eart.Itraisesitsspirits(打起精神)totryoncemore,successfullygainingitsdeliciousdishthistime.Themeaningrevealed/conveyedinthepictureisevident,thatis,wearesupposedtobedeterminedenoughtoreachourgoals.Itisthestrongmindthatcontributestothelittlesnail’ssuccess.Withoutdetermination,itwouldbeimposs
3、ibleforittogetthefascinatingleaves.Thesamegoesfor(对于…...也一样)ushumanbeings.Astheproverbgoes,“Manismadeofbloodandflesh,andaspecialfiber(纤维)calleddetermination.”Determinationistheprecursor(先驱)tosuccess.Frommyperspective（视角）,allofusoughttohavedetermination.Ithelpsustobestrong-mindedtooverc
4、ometheobstaclesahead,especiallywhenweareonatoughroad.Withdetermination,wecanbemotivated(促动，激发)tochaseourdreams(追逐梦想)andtoperformbetterinstudy.Hence(因此)don’tbeafraidoffailure—bedetermined!Remember,ouraimswillbeunquestionablyattained!二.如何写高分作文？一篇作文的优劣，无论是记叙文、议论文、说明文还是夹叙夹议，都可以简单地从以下几个方面是否
5、运用适当甚至是活用来判断（以上面这篇作文为例）：1.词(动、名、形、副、连接词等等)：failtodosth.,reveal,convey,go,motivate,perform,attain;delicious,painful,dizzy,evident,determined,fascinating,strong-minded,tough;immediately,successfully,especially,unquestionably;nevertheless,thatis,frommyperspective,hence词的运用应丰富、多样，而且不能只限于动词
6、和名词，形容词和副词的使用能增加文章的准确性和生动性；连接词的使用可以使文章结构严谨、自然流畅、富有节奏。2.短语：setaboutdoing,falloffthetree,bumpintotheground,loseheart,raiseone’sspirits,besupposedto,reachone’sgoals,contributeto(促成)，overcometheobstaclesahead,chaseone’sdreams,performbetterinstudy请尽量使用高中学的短语！初中学的短语相对比较浅显，不足以成为亮点。3.句式：with…o
7、nthetop,Itis…that…,Without…,itwouldbe…，Thesamegoesfor,Asa/theproverbgoes作文还可运用同学们平时学的定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句、强调句、倒装句等等。但不可只用长句。长句表述具体，说理严密；短剧简洁明快、精炼扼要，明白易懂。既然各有所长，在写作时就应根据实际需要，交替使用简单句、并列句和复合句，以达到“长短错落有致，句式丰富多样”的效果。4.非谓语：attracted(状语),gaining(状语),revealed/conveyed(定语)非谓语动词简洁明快、节奏紧凑、表意灵巧，是帮你拿高
