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1、英语六级写作高分句型高分作文标志1:四级120-150字;六级150—180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项: 1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicab
2、leapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively. 2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说:Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitud
3、ethat… 3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think, people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写
4、作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。 ComputerandIBySimmy Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.Th
5、atnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome. exceedingly替换very thrilling替换exciting sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth. google替换search anarmyof替换alotof Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththead
6、vancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure! Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular C
7、oincidentwith…非常地道的词汇,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With… Advancement替换development Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto Current(currently)替换now Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth. Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的 Forastart,wecan,freely,search
8、desiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ou