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1、中考英语写作语法和句型初中写作中的常见错误1、结构错误Therehassomedifferentideasabout…Therearesomedifferentideasabout…正：Therebe…2.误用句型结构误：Whenamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.正：Whenhewasamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.3.符号错误Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld.

2、SuchasSuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.正：Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld,suchas,SuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.4.缺少动词我累了。——I'mtired.误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.误Theapplescheap.I'lltakesome.正Theapplesarecheap.I'lltakesome.5.缺少介词、冠词

3、等误Becauseheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.6.代词的误用误ImotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforIfather.正MymotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather.7.句子不完整误Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.Fo

4、rexample,myfriendinhighschool.（这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。）正Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myfriendinhighschool.8.前后不一致所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。误Whenonehaveknowledge,hecandowhathewanttodo.（人一旦有了知识，他

5、就能想干什么就干什么。）剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。正Whenonehasknowledge,hecandowhathewants（todo）9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误误WhenIgettothestationthetrainleave.正WhenIgottothestationthetrainhadleft.10.词性误用．Weallknowthatfailisthemotherofsucceed.Weallknowthatfailureisthe

6、motherofsuccess.successsuccessfulsuccessfullysucceedHegotsuccess.Hewassuccessful.Hediditsuccessfully.Hesucceeded.Makeourcitygreenerisimportant.Makingourcitygreenerisimportant.人们可以通过因特网获得信息。PeoplecanbytheInternettogetinformation.PeoplecangetinformationthroughtheInternet.1

7、1．词语赘用词语赘用就是在文章中使用了多余的字（uselesswords），或用了大词（bigwords），雅词（elegantwords），形成了废话（deadword），使文章组织不严密，内容模糊不清。IPhoneisabrand-new,cool,modern,entertaining,smarthightech.2-3个形容词足矣！切记用and连接。PeoplewhoareinBeijingareworkinghardforthe2008Olympics.PeopleinBeijingareworkinghardforthe200

8、8Olympics.查字典lookupadictionary看词性看例句12.文化差异百里挑一oneinahundredoneinathousand黄头发yellowhai