2011-6英语六级真题答案

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1、2011年6月英语六级考试答案完整版(沪江网校版)PartIWriting　　标准版　　Myopiniononcertificatecraze　　Thegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswert

2、hatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why'sthecraze?　　Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.Anotherfactoris

3、thatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone'sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.　　ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshould

4、bemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.　　文章点评：　　这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。本文先对学生的考证热进行简介，引出全篇；接着分析这一现象背后的原因；整体看思路清晰

5、，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。　　本篇亮点表达：　　Thegrowingtendency…hasnowevolvedinto…　　bebusilyengagedindoing　　Thereasonbehind…　　harshjobmarket　　havenochoicebutto…　　parlaytheirqualifications　　sth.weighsheavilyintermsof…　　increasingone'soddsof…　　beinvolvedindoing…　　bec

6、ompelledtodo…　　haveanopenmindtoward…　　capabilityboosting　　本文有待提高之处：　　1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。逻辑严谨，论证严密；句式表达灵活，用语较为地道。　　2.微观语言点方面，有个主谓一致的方面的错误（diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily）；有些语句稍显啰嗦，比quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthat…

7、大可简化成you'dmostlikelybetoldthat…更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多；另外某些用语多重复，比如job多次出现；为了避免此类现象，文中的theenormouspressureoffindingajob不妨改为theenormouspressureofgettingemployed。　　从整体看，本篇文章不错，值得参考借鉴，不过用于方面还有待提高。　　高分版　　Certificatecraze　　Recentlythephenomenonofcertificatecraz

8、ehasbecomeabigconcernofthepublic.Itisalsoanewcrazeintheuniversity,whichseemslikearoutineactivityoncampus,forcertificatesdoplayavitalrolewhenstudentslookforadecentjob.　　Admittedly,therearedifferentpurposesbehindthisphenomen