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1、Let'scomparetwoanswerstoaquestion.Thetopicisasfollows:Internationaltourismhasbroughtenormousbenefittomanyplaces.Atthesametime,thereisconcernaboutitsimpactonlocalinhabitantsandtheenvironment.Dothedisadvantagesofinternationaltourismoutweighthedisadvantages?APoorEss
2、ay-Thefollowingisaband5essay.Internationaltourismhasbroughtenormousbenefittomanyplaces・Atthesametime,thereisconcernaboutitsimpactonlocalinhabitantsandtheenvironment.Dothedisadvantagesofinternationaltourismoutweightheadvantages?Inmyopinionadvantagesoutweightthedis
3、advantages.Firstly,manycountrieslikeEgyptorTailandlivefromtourismLotsofpeopleworkthereasaseilsmensortouristguides・Thesecountrieswithoutsupportoftouristswouldn'tbeabletofuntcionproperly.Secondly,incountriesvisitedbytouristsareplentyofplaceswherepeoplejustcan'tpass
4、becauseofrareanimalsorplants.Anotherthingisthatpeopleliketravelingandseeingnewexoticplaces・Theylikelieonthebeachorswiminocean.Furthermore,tourismisnowmoregrowingindustryhigheringtousandsofpeople・Therearemakeingnewplacestoworkandtohavefun.Butontheotherhand,peopleo
5、ftenforgetthattheyaren'ttheonlybeingsontheplanet.Manytouristsarelivinggarbagejustanywhere・Someofthemwan'tanexoticsouvenirsotheypayforillegalthingslikedeadorliveanimalsorsomesculpture・TosumupIthinkinternationaltravelingisagoodthingbutpeoplemustrealisethatthereisso
6、methingelsebesidesthem・Theyneedtoknowthatfloraandfaunaneedstobeprotected・Peoplehavetoenjoytheirholidaysbutalsowprotectenvironment.Belowisananalysisofthisessay.TaskResponse・Theessayquestionhasbeencopiedandusedastheintroduction(paragraph1).Oncethese34wordsaretakeno
7、ffthewordcount,theresponseisunderlengthat194wordsandsolosesmarks・Nevertheless,thetopicisaddressedandarelevantpositionisexpressed,althoughtherearepatches・asinthethirdparagraph-wherethedevelopmentisunclear.Otherideasaremorerelevantbutaresometimesinsufficientlydevel
8、oped・CoherenceandCohesion.Thecandidate'sideasareclearlyorganised,andthereisanoverallprogressionwithintheresponse・Thereissomeeffectiveuseofarangeofcohesivedevic
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