【作文实战演习场之第六场演习】《我的老师》写作的全过程

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1、【作文实战演习场之第六场演习】《我的老师》写作的全过程SixthexercisesintheactualcombatfieldSixthexercisesintheactualcombatfieldSixthexercisesintheactualcombatfieldSpecialexercises:thewholeprocessofwriting"myteacher"Exercisetime:October19,2000Tutor:YongLiDrillstudent:waveletExerciseprocess:1.overalloutlinedevelopme

2、ntThefirststepistodesignthebasicsentenceStep:A.identifies,confirms,orconfirmstheprotagonistsAfterB.,designthebasicsentence(findthecharactersforthecharacters)Operate:A.identifies,confirms,orconfirmstheprotagonistsOriginaltitle:MyteacherTopicafterconversion:MyteacherLiuAfterB.,designtheba

3、sicsentence(findthecharactersforthecharacters)TheteacherLiustrictindemandsofdoingthingsThesecondstepistodesignotheroutlinesentencesStep:A.designsseveralspecificsentencesforthebasesentence(afterthebasesentence)B.putalltheoutlinesentencesinorderOperate:A.designsseveralspecificsentencesfor

4、thebasesentence(afterthebasesentence)Basicsentence:Designseveralconcretesentencesforthebasicpointsentence:TeacherLiuisverystrictwithhiscolleaguesTeacherLiuisverystrictwithusTeacherLiuisverystrictwithhimselfB.putalltheoutlinesentencesinorderTheteacherLiustrictindemandsofdoingthingsTeache

5、rLiuisverystrictwithhiscolleaguesTeacherLiuisverystrictwithusTeacherLiuisverystrictwithhimself2.partoutlinedevelopmentThethirdstepistoexpandtheextendedsentencebyusingtheotheroutlinesentencesinthewholeoutlinesentenceasthelocaloutlineOperate:TeacherLiuisverystrictwithhiscolleaguesTeacherL

6、iuisverystrictwithhimselfThefourthstepistoexpandthelocaloutlineoftheotheroutlinesentencesinthewholeoutlineOperate:To''TeacherLiutocolleaguesmeticulous"partialoutlinedevelopmentExtensionmethod:2Expandtheanswer:Theyoungteachermustnotlistentoher・Givetheteacherathoroughoutlineofourrequireme

7、ntsExtensionmethod:22Expandtheanswer:WearemeticulousinstudyWearemeticulousinlifeGivetheteacheradetailedoutlineofhisownrequirementsExtensionmethod:22Expandtheanswer:Bestrictwithone'ssonLearningaboutthecomputerrequiresmeticulous3.,thecontentoftheexpansion(intheexpansionshouldpaya