《高日作业指导》PPT课件

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1、WritingFundamentalsEnglishinDailyLifeAgendaThefirstassignmentThesecondassignmentThedeadline高级日常英语作业01(第1-4单元)高级日常英语作业02(朗读题)MyRoutineTripInstructions:FollowingtheexampleinUnit4,Activity6,Task2,writeabriefaccount(120-150words)describingyourroutinetriptoaworkplaceortoastudyplace.p.189NowIstu

2、dyattheuniversity,whichisinthetowncentre.Myhomeisontheoutskirtsofthetown,aboutoneandahalfmilesfromtheuniversity.ThereisaregularbusservicebetweenthetwobutIprefertowalkwhentheweather'sfine.Itisapleasantwalk,downhillalltheway!IttakesmeaboutfortyminutesandIspendthetimeenjoyingthepeaceandquieto

3、ftheearlymorningandthinkingaboutthedayahead.Ipassalovelyoldchurchonthewayandhavetocrosstheriver.Sometimes,ifIhavetime,Istoptochattooneortwopeopleontheway.Ifitisraining,Ihavetotakethebus.Thebusjourneyitselfisquickbutit’salongwalkfrommyhousetothebusstopandthenfromthebusstoptotheuniversity.So

4、itisactuallyquickertodothewholejourneyonfoot!Itischeapertoo.Thebuscosts54pence,whichisquiteexpensiveforsuchashortdistance…SomehelpfulwordsSubway/underground地铁Taxi/bus/bike/bicycle/motorbikehitchhiking搭便车Long-distancebus长途客车Regularbus班车Shuttlebus往返巴士Markingcriteria本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50

5、分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，三部分分值相加即为作文的总分。语言50分用词巧妙，词汇丰富，表达手法灵活多变，写作技巧精湛，明显超出普通水平。语法结构严谨。40分用词正确，能灵活运用多种表达手法，偶有选词错误。语法结构一般。30分（及格）用词能力稍差，表达手法单一，选词有较明显错误。语法结构需较多改进。20分用词较差，表达手法单一。文中时用汉语词汇或拼音。选词有明显错误。语法结构急需改进。Example1Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetwee

6、nmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtu

7、be.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,I