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1、一、遣词造句1.存在的问题:①写文章时,想到什么词就用什么词。而不是在自己所掌握的词汇中进行挑选。1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。A:TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.B:TheflatsituatesinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.2)在周末我们做很多作业。A:Atweekends,wehavealotofhomeworktodo.B:Atweekends,wehaveendlesshomeworktodo.②阅读中接触过的多种修辞法,自己写作时,不懂得根据语
2、境使用。比喻1)人没有知识好比房屋没有地基。Amanwithoutknowledgeislikeahousewithoutafoundation.生活没有目标,犹如航海之无指南针。Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.——J.Ruskin鲁斯金2)字典对我们是很有帮助的。A:Dictionariesarequitehelpfultous.B:Dictionariesareourhelpfulteachers.3)空气对于我们好比水对于鱼一样重要。A:Airtousi
3、sasimportantaswatertofish.B:Airistouswhatwateristofish.读书对于思想好比运动对于身体一样。Readingistothemindwhatexerciseistothebody.排比1)Weexpectedfriendstohavewarmth,friendship,humanity.2)Somebooksaretobetasted,otherstobeswallowedandsomefewtobechewedanddigested.——FrancisBaconA:一些书
4、可以浅尝即止;一些书可以狼吞虎咽;而有些书则需要细嚼慢咽,好好消化。B:有些书只要浏览一下,有些书要仔细阅读,有些书要领会和消化3)Frommyobservation,manypeopletodayspendtheirtimereceivingmoreandmoreeducation,workingmoreandmorehours,andmakingmoreandmoremoney.4)Withoutscienceandtechnologyhumanlifecannotbesocivilized,socomfortabl
5、eandsoconvenient.③不能将所学句式如强调句、倒装句、带分词结构或独立主格结构用于写作中,作文中多半是主-谓-宾或主-系-表结构,因而文章总体显得比较单调Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.Itisthedevelopmentofsciencea
6、ndtechnologythathasbroughttheprogress,convenienceandcomforttousmankind.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedonotcherishthewildlife.WeNeedtoBroadenOurKnowledge提纲:1.科学技术是社会发展所不可缺少的2.社会科学和自然科学相互渗透3.现代大学生需要广博的知识Knowledgeispower,especiallyscientificandtechnologicalknowledge.Scie
7、nceandtechnologyarethemotivepowerofthesocialdevelopment.Withoutthemhumansocietycouldneverhavedevelopedfromprimitivesocietytomodernsociety.Therefore,toconquerandtransformnature,wemustmasterscientificknowledge.AsFrancisBaconputsit,knowldegeispower.Throughouthumanhi
8、story,thereisnothingmoreimportantthanscienceandtechnology.ItwastheinventionofthesteamenginethatledtotheIndustrialRevolutionwhichgreatlychangedtheworld.Thedisco