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1、(一)现象描述段现象段:(引出问题+具体描述+总结问题)1)引出问题:首句.Incurrentsociety,ithasbecomea(prevalent)trendforsb.todosth.或者Nowadays,ithasbecomeacommonphenomenonforsb.nottodosth.e.g(1).Incurrentsociety,ithasbecomea(prevalent)trendforsomeyoungsterstocommunicatewitheachotherthroughtheInternet.e.g.(2.)Incu
2、rrentsociety,ithasbecomeacommonphenomenonforindividualstopurchasevariousgoodsfromtheInternet.e.g.(3.)Onmanycampuses,ithasbecomeatrendformanystudentstogivelessattentiontospellinginEnglishlearning.e.g.(4.)Nowadays,ithasbecomeatrend/severeproblem/commonphenomenonforsomeyoungstudent
3、snottofocusonspellingwhentheystudyEnglish.12)首段第二句:具体描述(事实描述:相关人+感受):Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofindividualsfinditratherconvenient/comfortable/inexpensive/natural/necessarytodo.sth.convenient负面:difficult/hard/troublesome/useless/unnecessarye.g.(1)Meanwhile,anincreasingnumbero
4、fyoungpeoplefinditratheruselessandunnecessarytodealwithsmallthings.e.g.(2)Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofteenagersfinditratherdifficultandboringtounderstandliterature.e.g.(3)Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofyoungstersfinditratherconvenientandefficienttokeeponlinecontact.e.g.(4)Meanw
5、hile,anincreasingnumberofyoungstersfinditratherconvenient,comfortableandefficienttogainknowledgeorinformationtheyneed.23)首段三句(举例子)e.g.(1)Takingalookaround,wecanfindplentyofspellingmistakesinstudents’writing.e.g.(2)Takingalookaround,wecannoticeplentyofexamplesjustlikethesceneinth
6、epicture.e.g.(3)Atypicalexampleisthegirl/boyintheabovepicture.e.g.(4)Takingalookaroundwecannoticeagreatmanyshoppingwebsiteslikethis:Taobao,DangdangandAmazon.4)首段四句(总结问题:承上+启下)三句1:Therefore/Thus,weshouldkeepacloseeyeonthisissue.三句2:Asaresult/Consequently/Accordingly,sth.callsforc
7、loseattentionofthewholesociety.3(二)分析原因段原因段=主题句+原因1+原因2+总结e.g.(1)(主题句)Itisevidentthatthecausesofthisphenomenonarediverse.(原因1:家庭)Tobeginwith,thechangeoffamilystructureistherootcause.(原因1体现)Atypicalexampleisthatinmostfamilies,thereisonlyonechildwhoislovedbynotonlyparents,butalsog
8、randparents.(原因2)Inaddition,theincorrectsenseof