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1、高分作文的标准及实例分析　　1)高分作文英语作文若想获得高分，必须在内容和语言两个方面达到考纲的要求。从内容上来说，必须做到要点齐全，审题准确，（如举实例要为所论述的观点服务，做到不多不少不偏）。从语言上来说，第一，表达要清楚，文字要连贯。语言要简洁、准确，使阅卷人能通过作文内容领会作者的意图；每个段落要根据提纲要点确定不同的段落主题句，且能清楚地表现段落所要表达的思想内容；使用过渡词语实现上下文之间在内容和结构上的衔接。第二，文章中句式要有变化，可以以介词短语开头、以非谓语动词短语开头、以形容词或副词开头等；句型要多样化，简

2、单句、并列句、复合句、长句和短句综合使用。第三，句子结构和用词要准确。第四，文章中要有闪光点，切忌通篇语言贫乏。否则，即使内容切题、语言规范，也难以得高分。在下面的例子中，第一句话平淡无味，缺乏闪光点，第二句话为修改、润色后的句子，给人的感觉就大不一样。　　例1：　　Somereasonsfor。。。are:　　Thereareseveralpossiblereasonsfor。。。asillustratedbelow：　　例2：　　Weneedlove.Weshouldofferlove.　　Notonlydoweneedl

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