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1、Writing1阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。YesterdayMattwassick.IpickedupArchiefromthesitterandEloisefromschoolanddecidedtoruntoTargetforafewthings.Ihadhopedtobeinandoutquickly.Ifoundalinewithjustonepersonaheadofmeandbeganorganizingmyitemsontheconveyor.Afterplacingmyitems,Ilooke
2、duptoseethatthepersonaheadofmewasanelderlywoman.Shewaspayingforheritemswithchangeandwantedtopurchaseeachseparately.Iwasfrustratedwiththiswomanandtheinconvenienceshehadplacedonme.ButthenIwatchedtheyoungemployeewiththiswoman.Iwatchedhimhelphercountherchange,eversosoftlyta
3、kingitfromhershakinghands.Whensheaskedifshehadenoughtobuyareusablebag,hetoldhershedidandwenttwolinesovertogetoneforherandthenrepackagedheritems.Neveroncewasthisemployeeangry.Hewasnothingbutpatientandkind.AsIwaswatchinghim,IsawthatEloisewastoo.Shewasstandingnexttothewoma
4、n,watchingtheemployeecountthechange.IrealizedIhadn’tbeeninconveniencedatall.Thatmydaughterwasinsteadwitnessingkindnessandpatienceandbeingtaughtthisvaluablelessonbyacompletestranger.Whenthewomanwasfinished,theemployeebeganringingupmyitemsandthankedmeformypatience.Ithenth
5、ankedhimforteachinguspatienceandkindnessbyhistreatmentofthatelderlywoman.WhenhewasfinishedIpushedmycartthroughthestoretryingtofindthemanager.Iwantedhertoknowoftheemployee’skindnessandpatienceandhowmuchitmeanttome.Aftertrackingherdownandsharingthestorywithher,weleftTarge
6、twithacartfullofconsumableitems,butwhatismore,aheartfullofgratitudeforsuchaninvaluablelesson.IfyouareeverintheGlendaleTarget,giveIshmaelasmileandanod.Theworldcouldusemorepeoplelikehim.______________________________________________________________________________________
7、__________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要,先要找到以下两个问题的答案:(1)谁做了什么?(2)结果如何?如果是夹叙夹议文,还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。就该题而言,本文的概要应该包含:作者购物的时间、地点、结果以及从本次购物中得到的启示,最后用自己的语言串联起来。【参考范文】Thepassagetellsusanexperie
8、nceofshopping.(要点1)Oneday,theauthorwithtwochildrenwenttoTargetforshopping.(要点2)Whilewaitinginline,shefoundanol
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