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1、英语作文讲评1、Helpstudentshowtoorganizeacomposition.2、Howtomakecorrectsentences.3、Howtouseconjunctionstomakeyourcompositionmoreperfect.LearningobjectivesandImportantpoints.假如你是心理医生Dr.Smith,你收到学生Cathy的来信。她在信中说自己很喜欢看电视，但父母担心影响学习不让她看，她有时和父母争吵，很烦恼，却不知道该怎么办。请你根据以下提示，给Cathy回信，可适当发挥。70词左右。

2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。解决方法：不要再和父母争吵；要学着理解父母；要和父母沟通想法。DearCathy,Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblems._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishe

3、s!Yours,Dr.Smith作文本次作文展评：展评(一)BeginningWellbegunishalfdone.1.Herearesomeadviceforyou.(王子嫣)2.I’msorrytohearthatyouareunhappy.(孙程帅)3.Firstofall,Idon’tthinkyoushouldarguewithyourparents.Youshouldunderstandthembecausetheyhopeyoutohaveagreatfuture.Youshouldsay“sorry”tothem.(徐洁)4.Yo

4、urparentsdon’tletyouwatchTVbecausetheyworryaboutyourstudy.(李丽欣)展评(二)正文1.WatchingTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.(王子嫣)2.Youcanmakemorefriends.(王子嫣)3.Youshouldsaysorrytoyourparentsandtellthemwhatyouthink.(高萍)4.Youshouldlearntounderstandyourparentsanddon’targuewiththemanymore!(林彦汐)5.If

5、youdothat,IthinkyourparentswillletyouwatchTV.(徐洁)展评(三)Wonderfulending1.Youshouldcommunicatewithyourfriendsandlistentoyourparents.Yourparentshopeyouhaveagoodfuture.(景腾)2.Youcantellthemthatyouareundertoomuchpressure.Youneedmoretimeandfreedomtorelaxyourself.(罗世虎)3.Haveagoodtimepl

6、ayingwithyourparents.(孙程帅)4.Ihopeyouwillbehappysoon!(管艺涵)5.Itcanmakeyougetonwellwithyourparents.(孟德嵘)6.Ithinkit’simportanttotalkwithyourparentsaboutyourideas.(徐洁)常见错误1.Ithinkyoucan'twatchTVtoomuch.2.Ithinkyoushouldn'targuewiththem.3.Youshouldtalkingwiththem.4.Ihopemyadvicescan

7、helpyou.5.Youshould_______理解yourparents.6.YoulikewatchTV.7.Youparentsdon'tletyouwatchTV.don’tthinkyoucandon’tthinkyoushouldtalkadviceunderstandwatchingYour8.Theywanttoyoucanhaveagoodfuture.9.Haveagoodluckytoyou!10.Don'tupset.11.Youknowyourparentsareloveyou.12.Yourparentsverylo

8、veyou.常见错误youtoluckbeupsetloveloveyouverymuch佳文欣赏DearCathy,Th