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1、Units3~5【素材示例】随着社会的发展,生活节奏的加快,人们的工作压力也越来越大,人们更需要一些娱乐活动,请就娱乐活动这一话题发表自己的观点看法。审题构思:篇章结构:内容要点:拟关键词:构建句式:【佳作播报】Recreationalactivities—ByJacksonIntheeraofinformationandtechnology,thereareallkindsofrecreationalactivities.Somepeoplethinkthoserecreationalactivitiesaregreata
2、ndnecessary,becausetheycanhelppeoplerelaxfromthehardworkandstudy.Someoftheactivities,suchashiking,jogging,canhelppeoplerelaxphysically;while①someofthem,suchassurfingtheInternet,canhelppeoplerelaxmentally.However,somepeoplethinkthatsomanykindsofrecreationalactivitie
3、smayhaveabadeffectonourlives.Somepeoplemaynotresistsometemptationsfromthoseactivities,andindulge(放任,纵容)themselvesinthoseactivities.Atlasttheyarelured(诱惑)awayfromtheirstudyortheirwork.Inmyopinion,weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheadvantagesofvariousrecreationalactivities
4、andmakethemostuseof②them.Meanwhile,weshouldlearnhowtousethoseactivitiespositively,andmakethemahelpfultoolforourdevelopment.【赏文酌句】作者首段提出问题,越来越多的娱乐活动出现在人们的生活中以及对人们的影响,第二段分析娱乐活动对人们的负面影响,第三段表明作者的观点和看法。本文使用了高级词汇像era,relax,mentally,lure等,过渡词像suchas,while,meanwhile运用准确,另外
5、because引导的状语从句等复合句的使用,haveabadeffecton,makeuseof等短语的使用也很地道。【佳句模拟】1.whileconj.“而,然而”,表示“对比”,是议论文体中的高频表达。[模拟]Weknowusuallywomenstayathomeanddoallthehouseworkwhilemengoouttowork.我们知道,通常女人们在家里做家务,而男人们则外出工作。2.makeuseof利用[模拟]Tobeagoodlearner,youmustmakefulluseoflibrarybo
6、oks,newspapersandmagazines.要成为优秀的学习者,你必须充分利用图书馆里的图书和报刊杂志。佳句背诵Iamwritingtomakeacomplaintaboutyourstandardofservice.我写信是为了投诉你们的服务质量。Iammostreluctanttocomplain,buttheserviceattitudeofyourassistantsisreallyannoying.我非常不愿意投诉,但你们的店员的服务态度确实恼人。Oneannoyingaspectofyourser
7、viceisyourunfriendlyattitudetowardcustomers.你们的服务项目中一个令人不满的地方是对待顾客的态度不友好。Pleasedwithyourserviceforyears,nowIfeelverydisappointed.虽然多年来我一直很满意你们的服务,但现在我非常失望。Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucoulddosomethingaboutthis.如果你能为此采取措施我将万分感谢。Itrustyouwilltakemycomplaintsseri
8、ously.我相信你会认真对待我的投诉。Ihopeyouwillgivedueattentiontothismatter.希望对此事你能给予足够的重视。Iwouldliketodrawtheattentionoftheauthoritiesconcernedtothepollution
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