英语考研小作文模板

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1、第一篇DearElle,IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelpattheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulendmeyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenappearinginonceayearcampusdancingparty.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffereddresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpres

2、smywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely,LiMing修改意见：DearElle,Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelp(for后面不能加句子，可改为yourhelp)attheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulend(改为lending)meyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwould(加not)havebeenappearing(ap

3、peared)in(改为at)onceayear(可以用一个定语从句来修饰，此处删掉)campusdancingparty(加上,whichisheldonlyonceeveryyear).Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffered(加the)dresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely,LiMing2分微点评：第一段的最后一句话中，由于没有写not，使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下

4、虚拟语气的用法。另外，for后面是不能加句子的。第二篇DearBob,IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,ThenhelpmetopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseektothewayoflearningEngl

5、ishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikelytohelpotherswithoutthepay.Again，Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.修改意见：DearBob,IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassis

6、tanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,Then(删除)help(改为helping)metopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseek(改为seeking)tothewayoflearningEnglishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.(删除)Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikely(likely是很可能的意思)tohelpotherswithoutthe

7、pay(itwas…who..是强调句，此句可以改为，itwasyouwhoaresowarmlytohelpothersforfree).Again，Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.4分微点评：写完书信要有yourssincerely和你的名字。英语的句号是.此外，建议你看一下关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。第三篇DearBob,Iamwritingtoextendmysincer