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1、智浪教育—普惠英才文库学会中间段写作中间段的写作其实非常简单,只需要把提纲中的信息按照顺序写成语句就行了,只是中国考生要学会逻辑连接、句式连接并避免抽象地空谈。比如:Acompanyhasannouncedthatitwishestobuildalargefactorynearyourcommunity.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthisnewinfluenceonyourcommunity.Doyousupportoropposethefactory?Expla
2、inyourposition.假设考生写的第一层是建工厂的好处,第二层是建工厂的坏处(注意这是一道比较/反差类题目)。现在我们写第二层:建工厂对社区不好,而想写的是环境方面的内容,提纲可以是:Harmful:[pollution],notworthit——Air:acidrain,ozonedepletion,greenhouse——Water:drinkingwater——Trees:floodsanddroughts 这个段落可以这样写:Buildinglargefactorieswouldbeharmful
3、tothecommunitybecauseitwillinduceenvironmentalpollution.Factories,especiallythoseemoloyingtoxicchemicals,willdefinitelydestroythequalityofairandwaterintown.Theygeneratesmogandotheratmosphericemissionswhichcontributetothegreenhouseeffect,ozonedepletionandacidr
4、ain;theydumpindustrialwasteintoriverswhicharesupposedtobedrinkingwatersupply;theyacceleratethedeforestationwhichisproventoberesponsibleforabnormalfloodsandregionaldrought.Andpeople'shealthisatstake.Havingafewfactoriesisnotworththatrisk.再比如:Itisgenerallyagreed
5、thatsocietybenefitsfromtheworkofitsmembers.Comparethecontributionsofartiststosocietywiththecontributionsofscientiststosociety.Whichtypeofcontributiondoyouthinkisvaluedmorebyyoursociety?Givespecificreasonstosupportyouranswer.智浪教育—普惠英才文库假设考生写的第一层是关于艺术家对社会的贡献,第二
6、层写科学家对社会的贡献,而想写的内容是环境方面的,提纲可以写成:·Scientists:moreobvious——Advancement:Plane,computer,vacuumcleaner——Makeourliveseasier,moresecure——Helparts:CD,TV,movie,mp3 这个段落可以这样写:Thecontributionsscientistsmaketosocietyaremoreobviousthanthosemadebyartists.Almostallthecritic
7、aladvancementsthatmakeourliveseasier,suchastheplanewetaketotravelabroad,thecomputersweuse(whetherforworkorforentertainments),andthehomeapplianceswhichhelpuscookourmealsandcleanourhouses,comefromthecreativeideasandhardworkofscientists.Thosescientificdiscoverie
8、sandinnovationsmakeoutworkmoreefficient,ourshoppingmoreconvenient,andourlivesmoresecure.Plus,tosomeextentscientistsevencontributealottothearts——withouttechnologicalprogress,therewouldn’th