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1、英语专业2010级双学位毕业设计(论文)开题答辩日程安排表(第2组)学生:11T:Howmanywordsdoyouintendtowriteinthisessay?S：3000words2T：Abundantinformationwascoveredinyouroutline,especiallyinChapter2andChapter3,whichChapterismoreimportant?S：Chapter3ismoreimportant.3T：Couldyoutellmethedifferencebetween2.23and2.31?Haveyoueverfoundth

2、atthesetwopartsareoverlapping?4.T：InChapter3,youhavementionedsurrounding,whatdoyoumeanbythat?S：Itmeanstheideaofteachinginuniversitiesandtheteachingmechanismandsystemofhighereducation.Itincludestheinternalsurroundingandexternalsurrounding.5.T：ButyoushouldaddthesubtitlesinChapter3’s3.3.6.T：Plea

3、selookattheoutlineinChapter22.2,youhavementionedthat“ItshistoryinHarvardUniversity”,whatdoesitsmean?S：ItsmeanstheCreditSystem.论文修改建议：1.论文题目值得商榷，建议修改论文题目，缩小论文涵盖点2.outline部分有重叠部分3.参考文献书目主要包含美国大学学分制，美国监狱体质改革等问题，并未涉及哈佛大学，至少列出哈佛大学的主页网址，了解一下Creditsystem在哈佛大学的执行情况等。4.论文整体思维较混乱，建议删减Chapter2部分2.31节。21

4、.T：Howmanywordsdoyouintendtocoverforthepartofcomment?S：About5000words.2.YouhavediscussedaboutChina—USTradeIssues,whatChinaneedtodo?3.T：What’syourmajor?S：Mymajorispetroleumengineering.4.T：DoyouthinkyouhavehadabundantknowledgetoohandlethetradeissuesbetweenChinaandAmerica?S：Ilikereadingnewsabout

5、ChinaandUS.5.T：HaveyoueverfoundthatthereisnoreferencebooksabouttradeEnglishwordsandphrasesinyourWorkscited?6.T：PleaselookattheFirstPartinthefifthline:Sothat,westudyonChina—U.S.tradeissuesisnecessary,Haveyoufoundthattherearegrammarmistakesinthisline?论文修改建议：1.本文涉及到中美商贸问题，学生是石油工程学院，平常仅通过看新闻了解商贸方

6、面问题，建议学生最好转向写商务评论之类，缩小论文的切入点。1.Comment部分观点不明确，最好写清楚是关于译作本身的评价还是商务评论。2.文献排序格式问题3.参考书中并未涉及商贸英语方面的知识，至少需要包含商贸英语词汇4.在KeyWords中增加Translation.5.注意文章中语法问题31.T：InPart2,2.2youhavediscussedthedifferencesbetweenEnglishandChineseessayandyoumentiontheskills,canyoudistinguishtheessaycharacteristics?2.T：Iny

7、ououtline,inPart1.2TechniquesofclearWriting,in1.2.1youhavementionedtheTransitions,doyouknowthedifferencesbetweentransitionsinChineseandEnglish?3.T：Doyouknowthedifferencesbetweenskillsandessay’scharacters?Youshouldknowthatskillsaredifferentfro