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1、英语专业2010级双学位毕业设计(论文)开题答辩日程安排表(第2组)学生:11T:Howmanywordsdoyouintendtowriteinthisessay?S:3000words2T:Abundantinformationwascoveredinyouroutline,especiallyinChapter2andChapter3,whichChapterismoreimportant?S:Chapter3ismoreimportant.3T:Couldyoutellmethedifferencebetween2.23and2.31?Haveyoueverfoundth
2、atthesetwopartsareoverlapping?4.T:InChapter3,youhavementionedsurrounding,whatdoyoumeanbythat?S:Itmeanstheideaofteachinginuniversitiesandtheteachingmechanismandsystemofhighereducation.Itincludestheinternalsurroundingandexternalsurrounding.5.T:ButyoushouldaddthesubtitlesinChapter3’s3.3.6.T:Plea
3、selookattheoutlineinChapter22.2,youhavementionedthat“ItshistoryinHarvardUniversity”,whatdoesitsmean?S:ItsmeanstheCreditSystem.论文修改建议:1.论文题目值得商榷,建议修改论文题目,缩小论文涵盖点2.outline部分有重叠部分3.参考文献书目主要包含美国大学学分制,美国监狱体质改革等问题,并未涉及哈佛大学,至少列出哈佛大学的主页网址,了解一下Creditsystem在哈佛大学的执行情况等。4.论文整体思维较混乱,建议删减Chapter2部分2.31节。21
4、.T:Howmanywordsdoyouintendtocoverforthepartofcomment?S:About5000words.2.YouhavediscussedaboutChina—USTradeIssues,whatChinaneedtodo?3.T:What’syourmajor?S:Mymajorispetroleumengineering.4.T:DoyouthinkyouhavehadabundantknowledgetoohandlethetradeissuesbetweenChinaandAmerica?S:Ilikereadingnewsabout
5、ChinaandUS.5.T:HaveyoueverfoundthatthereisnoreferencebooksabouttradeEnglishwordsandphrasesinyourWorkscited?6.T:PleaselookattheFirstPartinthefifthline:Sothat,westudyonChina—U.S.tradeissuesisnecessary,Haveyoufoundthattherearegrammarmistakesinthisline?论文修改建议:1.本文涉及到中美商贸问题,学生是石油工程学院,平常仅通过看新闻了解商贸方
6、面问题,建议学生最好转向写商务评论之类,缩小论文的切入点。1.Comment部分观点不明确,最好写清楚是关于译作本身的评价还是商务评论。2.文献排序格式问题3.参考书中并未涉及商贸英语方面的知识,至少需要包含商贸英语词汇4.在KeyWords中增加Translation.5.注意文章中语法问题31.T:InPart2,2.2youhavediscussedthedifferencesbetweenEnglishandChineseessayandyoumentiontheskills,canyoudistinguishtheessaycharacteristics?2.T:Iny
7、ououtline,inPart1.2TechniquesofclearWriting,in1.2.1youhavementionedtheTransitions,doyouknowthedifferencesbetweentransitionsinChineseandEnglish?3.T:Doyouknowthedifferencesbetweenskillsandessay’scharacters?Youshouldknowthatskillsaredifferentfro
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