基础写作的写作技巧(如何写出复杂性的句子)

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1、Basicwriting基础写作Howtowriteastoryaboutaperson?本节课重点难点重点：短句变成长句，尤其是复合句和并列句的使用。难点：五个句子之间的自然过渡和衔接词的选用是写作难点。Makethesentencelonger.Thelonger,thebetter.Ourmathsteacherisawoman.OurmathsteacherOurmathsteacherisa________________woman.Ourmathsteacherisa__________

2、_woman,who____________________________________________________________,ourmathsteacherisa_________________woman,who_____________________________________.某中学生英语报社举办中学生“2005感动中国”观后感征文。你被2005感动中国人物洪战辉的事迹深深感动。根据下面提示写一篇征文，投给这家报社。洪战辉事迹简介：1、1982年出生于河南农村；2、199

3、4年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴；3、1995年，母亲不堪重负离家出走。4.他边学习边照顾捡来的妹妹和生病的父亲，担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学，并一直带着妹妹上大学，照看她……写作要求：只能用5个句子（不包括已给出的部分）表达全部的内容。参考词汇：2005感动中国TouchChina2005Group11.Recently,IwatchedTouchChina2005onTV.2.IwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhui.3.Hewasbor

4、ninHenanProvincein1982.Sentence1:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Recently,IwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhuiw

5、howasborninHenanProvincein1982.Group21.Hewas12.2.Hisfathergotmentaldisease.3.Onedayhebroughthomeanabandonednewly-borngirl.Sentence2:____________________________________________________________Group31.Hismothersufferedfromtheheavyburden.2.Ayearlater,his

6、motherdesertedthefamily3.Hongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.Sentence3:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ayearlater，

7、hismother,sufferingfromtheheavyburden,desertedthefamilyandHongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.Group41.Honglovedschoolandstudiedhard,2.Hewasfinallyadmittedtocollege.3.Hetookhissisterwithhimandcontinuedtocarefo

8、rher.Sentence4:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hong,wholovedschoolandstudiedhard,finallywasadmittedtocollege,buthetookhissisterwithhimandconti