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1、scribblesrubbishSchoolenvironmentProblemsSolutionsLearningobjectivesBytheendofthisperiod,wewillbeableto1.enlargeourvocabularyrelatedtoacertaintopic,theschoolenvironment,throughreviewingsomewords,phrasesandsentencepatterns;2.knowhowtopolish(润色)acomp
2、ositionbyintegratinginformationandusingvariousregularsentencepatterns.Writing假如你是中学生李华。你校英文报正在就学校乱涂乱画(scribbles)问题向全校师生征求解决的办法。请你用英语向该报写一封建议信。信的内容应包括以下方面:1.简单描述现象和个人看法;2.提出解决这一问题的建议(不少于2个);3.表达你的愿望。注意:1.词数:100词左右;2.信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。DearSir,DearSir,W
3、henwewalkaroundtheschoolwecanseesomescribblesonthewallsoftheschoolbuildings.Theyhaveinfluencedthebeautyofourschoolenvironment.Wehavetodosomethingtosolvethisproblem.First,ourschoolshouldmakesomerulestoforbidstudentsfromscribbling.Second,ourschoolshoul
4、deducatestudentsandletthemknowtheimportanceofprotectingourschoolenvironment.Third,weshouldclearthescribblesandmakethewallscleanagain.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Ialsohopeeveryonecantrytoprotectourschool.Bydoingsoourschoolcanbeabetterplacetostudyin.DearSi
5、r,Whenwewalkaroundtheschoolwecanseesomescribblesonthewallsoftheschoolbuildings.Theyhaveinfluencedthebeautyofourschoolenvironment.Wehavetodosomethingtosolvethisproblem.First,ourschoolshouldmakesomerulestoforbidstudentsfromscribbling.Second,ourschoolsh
6、ouldeducatestudentsandletthemknowtheimportanceofprotectingourschoolenvironment.Third,weshouldclearthescribblesandmakethewallscleanagain.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Ialsohopeeveryonecantrytoprotectourschool.Bydoingsoourschoolcanbeabetterplacetostudyin.优点:
7、1.要点全2.段落层次清晰3.连贯性尚可4.基本无语法错误5.书写整洁,卷面干净需改进的地方:语法结构、句式表达单一高分作文评分标准(高分23-25)卷面美要点齐无错误字数够文字优✔✔✔✔?★Polishingacomposition1.Integratingtheinformation写作信息整合并列连词主从句非谓语介词短语同位语Examples:1.Somepeoplesmokeeverywhere.Thisisharmfultoourenvironmentandhealth.(从句)2.W
8、henwewalkaroundtheschool,wecanseerubbisheverywhere.(非谓语)3.I’mLiHuawhoisastudentfromNanfangHighSchool.(同位语),whichWalkingI’mLiHua,astudentfromNanfangHighSchool.(同位语)2.Usingvariousregularsentencepatterns1).强调句型(Itiseveryone’seffortthatcanmakeourschool
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