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1、假如你叫李华，你们学校最近开展了一次创建“平安校园”的活动。请你用用英语写一篇短文，谈谈创建“平安校园”活动的重要性。短文应包括以下内容：增强安全意识的重要性；2.在不同场合均要注意安全（如在交通中、在运动中、在同学间发生矛盾时等）;3.将活动转化成全体师生的实际行动。注意：1、根据以上内容写一篇短文，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；2、词数120左右Recentlyourschoolhascarriedoutthe“safetyatschool”activityaimedatmakingourcampusasafeplaceto

2、stayon._____思路点拨Para1增强安全意识的重要性Para2叙述在几种不同场合要注意的安全事项Para3(Para3)将活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。Usefulexpressionsandstructurespromote/raisetheawarenessofsafetyindifferentsituations/onvariousoccasionscrossthestreetdosportsquarrelwithclassmatesput…intopracticeActionspeakslouderthanw

3、ords.Easiersaidthandone.It’sofvital/greatimportanceto…attachimportanceto…obeytherules;watchoutforwarmupfirstremaincalmIt’shightimethatwedidsth.Onlywhen/ifwedosthcanwe…高分范文Recentlyourschoolhascarriedoutthe“safetyatschool”activityaimedatmakingourcampusasafeplacetostay

4、on.Thereisnodenyingthatsafetyplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.（简明扼要点出重要性，但还可适当展开些。）Iconsiderthisasindeedagoodpractice,whichwillkeepusawarethatsafetyshouldalwayscomefirstinourdailylife,whetherwhenwestayatschooloroutsideit.（本句使用动词短语consider…as,keep+符合宾语，短语comefirst,

5、which引导的定语从句，whether…or结构，when引导的时间状语从句。）Weshouldbemorecautiousindifferentsituations.Weshouldobeythetrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.Whenwearedoingsports,weshouldattachimportancetothesafetyandavoidbeinghurt.Furthermore,whenwegetintotroublewithourclassmates,weshouldre

6、maincalmandavoidanyformoffighting,whichmayonlybringsufferingandpaintousmentallyandphysically.(运用状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、以及副词mentally，physically的使用均是亮点）AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifeelallthestudentsandteachersshouldworkhardandcreativelytokeepthe“safetyatschool”activityinmind.Beside

7、s,wearesupposedtoobservethelawanddisciplinewhereverweareatanymoment.(过渡自然)点评：本文要点齐全，表达规范，熟练运用各种复杂的结构、句式、动词短语和高级词汇等，显示出扎实的语言功底。上下文结构紧凑，过渡自然。Itgoeswithoutsayingthatteachersandstudentsshouldpaycloseattentiontosafetyasnothingismoreessentialthanourlife,whichcannevercomeb

8、ackoncelost.Soitisofgreatsignificancethatwebearinmindthat“safetycomesfirst”oneveryoccasion.Whencrossingthestreets,weshouldmakesurethatther