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1、书面表达专练图表作文假如你叫李华,受某报社的委托,对你校高中一二三年级的近视情况作个调查,每个年级抽一个班。请根据下面的抽样调查信息写一篇短文,介绍相关数据并分析其原因。注意:1.开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.词数120---150。[思路构建]本篇书面表达的写作素材是一个曲线图,很明显体裁为说明文,时态用一般现在时。本篇书面表达的写作要点很清楚:1.介绍相关数据。高一学生的抽样近视学生是15人,占全班人数的25%;高二是30人,占全班人数的50%;高三是60人,约占70%。2.分析原因。此时需
2、要中学生根据结合学习和生活实际进行适当的拓展,可以考虑下面的要点:1)学习任务繁重;2)学生很少参加体育锻炼;3.提出自己的看法,就是我们应该如何改变这种局面。从前面的分析看,本文可以采用三段式作文的写作模式,第一段介绍相关数据。在讲述了这些数据之后,第二段介绍原因。第三段,也是最后一段,再来探讨如何改善这种局面。从前面的提示看,写作中要注意使用各种语法,如可以使用虚拟语气,被动语态等,让书面表达使你“英雄有用武之地”。【写作范例】Recently,asamplesurveyhasbeencar
3、riedoutinoneclassofeachgradeinourschoolabouthowserioustheproblemofshortsightisinseniorhighstudents.Theresultsaremorethanworrying.Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,about25%ofthestudentsinSenior1aresufferingfromshortsight,whilethenumberhasclimbedto50%forSenior2s
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6、ometimeeverydaytoengageourselvesinexercise.Ifpropermeasuresaretaken,thesituationwilldefinitelygetimproved.【图表作文模板一】Asisshown/illustratedbythefigures/percentagesinthetable/piechart,hasbeenonrise/decreasesignificantly/dramaticallyfromintoin.Fromtheshar
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8、nsarecommonlyconvincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat.Iamsurethatmyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.【图表作文模板二】Thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe图表主题.Thefirstthingwenoticeisthat图表最大特点.Thismeansthatas(进一步说明).Wecanseefromthestatisticsgi