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1、一、语法错误（一）句子结构错误1．主从句叠置1)Therearemoreandmorestudentsliketousethecomputer.2)Therearestillmanyproblemsshouldbenotedandresolved.2．简单句叠置Ilikechattingonlineverymuch,Igotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend.3．从句叠置Asisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.4．句子成分缺失Ifworkhard,wewillsurelyb
2、esuccessful.5．语序错误1)Whycollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?2)Ioftenwonderwherehavetheygottheirmoney.（二）动词错误1．时态错误ManypeoplethoughtthattheInternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.2．语态错误1)Ihaveexcitedseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcomehere.2)Mostofthestudentssatisfywiththeserviceinthediningh
3、all.3．单复数错误1)Wisemanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.2)Someoneareafraidthatcomputermaycontrolmeninthefuture.4．非谓语动词错误1)Letmetorepresenteveryonetosay“hello”toyou.2)Doexerciseinthemorningisgoodforone’shealth.3)Havingstudiedinourschoolfor3years,thecanteenservicehaschangedalot.三）代词错误1)Wecanuseco
4、mputersindoingeverythingyoulike.2)Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodotheirwashingontheirown.（四）冠词错误1)Horseisanusefulanimal.2)TheexamwillbeheldintheDecember,2004.（五）词性错误1)Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggests.2)Ifapersonwantstosuccess,hemustlearntoenduresufferingsandsetbacks.二、用词错误1)Studentsmustknowhowtoapplya
5、computer.2)PeoplecantouchmanynewthingsontheInternet.3)Thepurposeofthisletteristoreactsomeopinionsontheserviceinthedininghall.三、表达习惯错误1)Whygeneratedsolargeachange?2)Now6000yuancanbuyaP4computer.3)Aroomoftenlives6-8students.写作的"七项基本原则":本文来自作文地带一,长短句原则工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用.
6、而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉牢记!强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可
7、以了二,主题句原则国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主.否则会给人造成"群龙无首"之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbefo
