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1、写作的重要性6分最低限,只要结构不出错,得分应该为9分。评判作文四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。内容不跑题即可,注意:1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。结构上牢记总分总:先写主题句(TopicSentence),再写分论点,最后写总结句(Conclusion)。语言最重要,往往使评分产生重大差异,语言要模仿和包装。基本表达人们认为:itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat越来越:beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof万能理由(Omnipo
2、tenceOOmnipotencemnipotence)1.方便:convenient/convenience2.效率:efficient/efficiently/efficiency3.节省和浪费:savetime/money/space;economical,thriftwastetime/money/space;costly,lavish4.人的心理健康:independent,cooperative,competitive,considerate,confident,creative,sociable,perseverance;selfish,isolated,con
3、serative5.人的身体健康:health,disease,strong,strength,energetic6.娱乐:colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relaxtired,boring,lonely7.环境:environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty8.安全和危险:safe,danger,risk9.经验:experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety10.人际:humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,
4、freely写完之后修改注意:(内容方面尽量不要修改)1、字母大小写2、怪符号3、单词拼写4、主谓一致5、动词时态6、名词单复数实例一题目:BicyclesBBicyclesicycles――AnAAnnImportantIImportantmportantMeansMMeanseansofooffTransportTTransportransportiniinnChinaCChinahina提纲:(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及(2)和汽车的比较(3)自行车在中国的前途1本文由新东方批改网(www.51pigai.comwwww.51pigai.comww.51pigai.
5、com)友情提供Score:SScore:core:8BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseitt
6、ogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.Thispointisveryimport
7、anttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremoder