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1、20032003年的作文以“温室花朵经不起风雨”为题,主题鲜明,易于发挥和扩展。针对两张图画的对策,一般需要比较共性或对比差异,然后第一段做表层的描述;第二段点题的含意,并结合自己在生活中的观察体会,联系实际,举例说明原因;第三段针对图中比喻的社会现象发表己见;尽力发挥自己的英语表述能力,得出结论。Sample1ItgoeswithoutsayingthatthedrawingsaimatrevealingacommonandseriousprobleminChina:howtoeducateandcultivatetheyoung.Letstakeacloserl
2、ookatthedrawingsinanidealcondition,theflowerblooms.Butwhenmovedoutofthegreenhouse,itperishesundertherainandstorm.ltisobviousthatthefloweringreenhousecantwithstandwindandrains.NowadaystheyounggenerationinChina,liketheflowerinthegreenhouse,liveunderthefullprotectionfromtheirparents.Paren
3、tswanttoshowalltheirlovetotheirchildren.Theygivetheirchildrenallthebest.thingstheycanaffordanddonotlettheirchildrendoanythingathome.Selfcenterednessandarbitrarinesshavebecomeatraitoftheyounggeneration.Onceleavingtheirparents,manyyoungpeoplecannotmakealivingoftheirown.Theymaygetlostwhen
4、steppingintothecomplexrealityandcannotfaceanyhardshipsanddifficulties-Childeducationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsdiscussednotonlybyeducationalexperts,butalsobypeopleinallwalksoflife.Thefailureofchildeducationdoesmoreharmtothedevelopmentofoursocietyandourcivilizationthantothechildr
5、enthemselves.Thus,itshightimethatparents,educatorsandthegovernmentmadeconcertedeffectstoputanendtothissituation.评分20分评语该作文内容切题,包含了题目要求的全部内容,表达清楚连贯,句式多样,用词恰当,符合英语表达方式,该作文之所以能获满分,主要因为其思路切中题目,而且语言规范、行文通畅,语句富有变化,用词准确生动。Sample2Asisshowninthetwopictures,thesameflowerhasdifferentfatewhenputin
6、differentsituations.Whenthereisprotection,theflowerbloomsbeautifully.However,whenexposeddirectlytorainandstorm,theflowerquicklywithers.Wecansafelycometotheconclusionthatgreenhouseflowerscannotwithstandrainandstorm.Thesameistruewithourchildren.AstheonechildpolicyisadoptedinChina,moreand
7、moreparentsoverprotecttheirchildren.Witheverythingdoneforthemandeveryneedsatisfiedbytheirparentsorgrandparents,theseonlychildrenseemtobehealthy,happyandhighspirited.Butwhentheyleavehome,theybecomedisappointedandfrustrated.Facingharshthingstheyhaveneverexperiencedbefore,suchascompetit
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