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1、基础写作训练--学会运用复合句和非谓语动词①Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.②Thesport,whichfirstappearedin1896,waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928Games.③ItwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheOlympic.④However,notuntil1968werew
2、omenfirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshooting.⑤Withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular,ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today.句子表达有何亮点？写作中复合句常见的错误1.只有从句，没有主句Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,sohecouldkeepcalminthest
3、orm.→Thekeeper,whohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,couldkeepcalminthestorm.2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子②Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,tearscamedownfromhisface.①Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,itismadeofglass.3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然Thereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwh
4、oaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.→OverfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.①Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,whichismadeofglass.②Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,withtearscomingdownfromhisface.4.过多地使用并列句组合信息②Weweredriv
5、ingoutintothecountry,andwesawourEnglishteacherridinginabus,andthebuswascrowded.①Itisabeautifulday,andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing.→Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing.→Asweweredrivingoutintothecountry,wesawourEnglishteacherridinginacrowded
6、bus.MyEnglishLearning①ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.②Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadeprogressinmyEnglish.③NowI’mdoingwellbothinwritingandreadinginEnglish.④ButIstillfindithardtolearnEnglish,suchassomedifficultidioms.⑤Difficultasitis,Ihavema
7、deupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.请看范例从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。其实，“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子：A)Simplesentence:Hearingthenews,hewashappy.B)CompoundsentenceA:HegavemeabookbutIforgottobringitbackhome.C)CompoundsentenceB:Whatheisdoinghasnothingtodowit
8、hme.=Whenheheardthenews,hewashappy.Hereare3waystomakesentences:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。LiLi,aboyof19,wasborninGuangdongin1986.2)借助介词短语做定语如：李飞，男
